Voted For: Linguistics

this verse was alot better more hard hitting punchlines and alot better structure the other verse fell off a little it was consistant enough to win on punchlines this verse was the better one... I was feeling the other verse because of the structue and boring to read...

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^Yep, youre a dick rider. I dont even think you read this one, cause I didnt see one punchline in either verse. I could be wrong, but why would they focus on punchlines in a topical?

i just wanna know where u seen a puncline at. lol. dont w/e. uppin

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Voted For: Forgotten Flow

alright...both structures were bad but linguuistics was better..but the imaginary...forgotten flow got that easily...forgotten flow had alot better vocabuluary...and his shit i was feelin it more...it rode the topic alot better...the flow was aiight too..

linguistics: your shit was ok..good structure..but i just wasnt feelin wat u was sayin u know..sall good though...ur shits straight..but u didnt ride the topic good enuff...and the vocab wasnt that good either

overall: flow got this

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Voted For: Forgotten Flow

FF-I think I was feeling yo verse wayy more. You came with more enthusiam and your verse was more interesting to read. I think you coudlve been more consistent in this one though. The last few lines seemed rushed and a lil off, but thruout yo whole verse, I think yo stayed more on topic, and explained the topic better, and rhymed it and structured it better.
Lungistics-Yo verse was ight to me, but I dont think you took it. You had good structure, but I dont think your verse flowed too good. And it was aslo too un-creative to me, and not interesting to read. I think you should work on that. But other than that i felt your verse was ight, but not winnable in this one. No hate.
overall-I think FF took this one. No hate. I voted for him because he had better structure and flow to his verse, and came more consistent, and had the least amount of flaws in this one.
No hate.

RTF. EXPLained. LinK in sig.

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uppin this shit f

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Voted For: Forgotten Flow

nice battle here, flow just got into it a lil bi more. His was deeper and relevant to the topic. Also had nice opener and closer, only thing is improve structure.

Ling
your shit flowed well and had a great structure, and it wasnt a bad drop but flow just camehared here, no hate please rtf links in sig.

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yo i just peeped this. if u can drop another link ill rtf

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uppin for the ko.........................................

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Voted For: Linguistics

Ok it was nice drop by both of ya'll, was deep man i was feeling it. I liked the subject as well was a good topic.
Fogotten man u structure was fucked though, u must u've "forgotten ya flow" lol jk, nah just ya bars are too long for a decent flow. Linguistics man ya flow was pretty nice but still could use some work. Overall i think linguistics took it because he portyaed his verse better overall. rtf plz,http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270

i gotta pu that shit back in my sig. my shit aint stretched i switch up my flow. i spit fas a lot.

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Voted For: Forgotten Flow

This was a dope battle, I liked both verses but I felt
that emotionally Flows verse was much much deeper..

Flow,,.. Flow was alright nothing major, structure was
messy but it was alright.

But on emotion that shit was dope, I didn't see where
it was going but when I got closer to the end I got it
and shit started making sense. This was a really dope
verse if stucture was a little better it would have been
a really dope verse u had dope vocab aswell...

Ling,... Shit man you come with everything dope flow
dope stuc but the emotion wasn't as hard hitting as
flows was...

Vote ~ Flow for very deep emotion, and a clear vision
of what happend in his verse.

Stay up both

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