Voted For: A_M_H

shit this wasnt a very good battle but its good i guess for newbies...

XCell - good structure,weak punches..never connected,flow was OK,wordplay was nice,personals need improvemnt...werd,multis was lackn....6/10

AMH- bad structure,good punches...good thing i read ya verse,flow was decent,wordplay was alright,personals was lackn also same with multis....6.5/10

both need ta elavate but good battle overall....

v/AMH

ight grafh & cali i appreciate y'all votes & yeah i say afta this shitty verse i dropped that it was not good but hey i will make sure from now on 2 not pull out ne bs verses from 1 of my homeboy'z closet at his house nemore still uppin 4 more votes

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Voted For: X-CELL

i scatter turds, watch how AMH shatters herbs..
i'll Strike Strongarm so hard i'll leave him wit Battered Nerves
^^^GOOD OPENER....OKAY PUNCH
Fuck this lesbo, AMH blows ya best flows wit ur on blood vessels..who believes ya name?
even this newbie booth shatters u if ya Arm Wrestle
^^^ DA 1ST LINE WAS GOOD WITH DA MULTIS...BUT Y U KEEP SAYIN DA WORD "SHATTER" N "ARM"??
this kid is Butt Ugly like a Red Ass Babboon..
trust this, soon u'll b doomed..Punched U Backwards
^^^^DIDN'T RYHME...OR YA RYHME SCHEME IS FUKKED UP
So Hard..i literally left ya Standing In The Moon
Battlin' me? u'll step wit fate, leave u locked inside a cube &
there's no escape..everybody knows U Envy Me even ya "Wreckord" is Filled Wit Hate
i shine more wit bolder lights when i smoulder mcs,
c'in no potential in x-cell molded writes, he sucks badly, asking 2 Prostitues Wit Over Bites
i'm ill no need 2 b actin' rude, leave this kid hangin' above the latitude..AMH Bashed His Arm Into Ya Brain & Left U Wit A Strong Attitude
^^^^^^DATZ ALL I CAN EXPLAIN LMAOOOO CUZZ AFTA LIKE DA FIRST 4 LINES...YA SHIT GOT CONFUSIN FIX DA WAY U WRITE YA BARS FAM OR U GON LOSE ALL DA TIME...

X-CELL...
(A)lil bitch actually think what he say is factually true
(M)ost mutha fuckas come to RV so cocky in there debut
(H)ow ever A_H_M couldnt be sick if he caught the flu
^^^^DA FIRST 2 LINES WERE OKAY..BUT DA "FLU" LINE SHUOLDN'T BE USED ANYMORE..AND 3 LINES A FUKK UP YA FLOW
Men dont respect little boy like u who blay with their balls
Put the phone to ur ass thats the only way u make booty calls
^^^LOL...FUNNY ASS PUNCHLINE..
Hes spirts broken u gettin ripped like pussy turing pregnacy
no way u gonna win but if so it well be accidentally
^^DECENT LINE
cause ill be damned if i get if i ever get merked by a newb
i abuse ya verse i refuse ya verse it aint applicable
^^^U FORCED DIS 2 RYHME
what ever ya say is whack jack cause it anit articual
^^^???

UMM I THINK YA VERSE WAS REAL BASIC BUT AT LEAST YA STRUCTURE AND SHIT WAS STR8...U WIN DIS BATTLE EASILY CUZZ I COULDN'T UNDERSTAND SHIT AMH..SAID AFTA DA 4TH LINE..

RETURN DA FAVOR LINK IN MY SIG

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^^he's scared.lol

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Voted For: A_M_H

aight ima give this to AMH. ya verse had me into it to begin wit but then you greatly fell off. ya structure was all over the place, no personals i saw, but some of ya punches hit in my eye.
The reason u won wasnt your verse though, it was X-Cells. all of ya punches was either wack as fuck or played. and this was the whole way through the battle. and btw, ya spellin was annoying as fuck. no personals, no punches hittin, only positive things i could really say bout this verse was that you tried, and u had good structure

v/AMH

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Voted For: X-CELL

the punches in this verse were the best and I really like the wordplay used here better but you could work a little on your structure the rhymes were nice but you need to be a more consistant.

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Voted For: A_M_H

aight, it wuz a close battle, both had good structure, vocab, punches, al that shit. do tha only thang thats makin vote fo amh iz cuz of hiz multies at tha beginnin. no hate x-cell, good versez by both, werd

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