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Old 07-31-02, 01:25 PM   #16
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Good Battle Man
 
Old 07-31-02, 04:00 PM   #17
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Yes indeed.
 
Old 07-31-02, 04:55 PM   #18
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Quote:
Originally posted by Shotta
oh and atheist this line looks bitten
How Will You Beat Me When You Can't Spell Your Name Right?

i herd sumthin just like it in the fabolous diss by ali vegas


How the fuck can that line be bitten? Anybody can use that line....you can't bite it.....I used that line a long time ago....but you can't bite it if it's a clearly stated fact.....that line is a punch that can be used by anybody....if it's true....

Now for the verses.....

Atheist

Your Punches Are Just A Pure Landfill - Your Style Is Garbage,
Tekneik Is Marvel-Less When I Take Away His Childish Avatar!.....(Pretty weak and it didn't rhyme)

It Is Like Tyson Versus Lewis, You're Putting Up A Lame Fight,
How Will You Beat Me When You Can't Spell Your Name Right?"......(Second line was a good personal, but the Tyson/Lewis lines are played and it was weak)

Claim Tight? This Pussy Is Wide Open, Easy To Rip This Herb,
It's Obvious His Skill Is A Blank Expression Like His Signature.....The first one was aight but the second line was a pretty effective punch.

Eye Is Parted, Stab Vision In Snooker, Make You Drop Eye-Cue, (IQ)
How Will You Teach Me When You Couldn't Finish High School?....The Eye-Cue line could've been better, but it's OK

Your verse was aight......but packed a lot of played lines...

Tekneik

Ya raps make a boozers sound, you entered tha wrong forum because your LL stands for tha loosers lounge/....Better start than Atheist's verse

Atheist you fag is that your ladies layed out gown?, both ways ya styles getting less recognition then a played out clown/....This shit is extremely weak.....no points on that one


He spits a cold sellar type like freeze connection, spitting ill at him made him catch a yeast infection/
I win tha elite election, you thought I was spitting nasty and then you saw Atheists reflection/.....This was weak except that second half of the 2nd bar about his reflection

Resuming on our wack inspection and it was him who got caught, poppin your pimples is tha only time your blowing up tha spot/
This kids like a rooster because he’s always claiming a cock, pissing yourself in jail is tha only time your flows on lock/....This was boring as hell and weak...

This kids ignored, you could introduce any artist and still not talk-to-tha-band/
He claims he’s been getting oral sex, but makes his girl talk-to-tha-hand /....The verse was boring pretty much but this closer took the battle from Atheist to me....


Vote=Tekneik

Edited to fix vote.....
 
Old 07-31-02, 06:36 PM   #19
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Tek came with harder punches overall, and that's what I look at most is the punches.

Resuming on our wack inspection and it was him who got caught, poppin your pimples is tha only time your blowing up tha spot/
This kids like a rooster because he’s always claiming a cock, pissing yourself in jail is tha only time your flows on lock/

^I liked that line the best

Vote-Tek

Peace
 
Old 07-31-02, 06:48 PM   #20
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kinnda close battle


punches - tek
multies - tie
wordplay - equal
flow - tek


tek came harder in this battle

vote - tek
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Old 08-03-02, 08:53 AM   #21
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Next time I need to come harder, show my full skill. But when do the next match ups go up? I want to kill the next opponent, I'll have to actually try next time and not underestimate.
 
Old 08-03-02, 09:41 AM   #22
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lol I underestimated you and dropped a wack verse
 
Old 08-03-02, 02:25 PM   #23
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UP FOR VOTES
 
Old 08-04-02, 12:33 AM   #24
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TEKNEIK WINS

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TEKNEIK- 1-0



ATHEIST- 0-1
 
 


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