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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
the kid 523 0 0%
Op!n!on 5 100.00%
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Old 03-12-05, 01:34 PM   #16
Adam
 
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This was feedback posted for Op!n!on

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Checking the polls................................
 
Old 03-12-05, 03:13 PM   #17
Op!n!on
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Upppin this shit for votes...................fuck don't sleep
 
Old 03-12-05, 03:17 PM   #18
rooq
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Voted For: Op!n!on

vote = op!n!ion

short fuckin battle, but i think op takes this with tha superior mathematical abilities....
j/k op's verse had a better flow/structure

the kid's verse was mostly bitten from 8 mile.
"i thought i liked you i didnt wanna be the one u come and suicided too.
You think you can beat me? so gay
a nigga got a betta chance join the KKK"

you thought people wouldn't notice?
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Old 03-12-05, 08:19 PM   #19
High-Dro
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Voted For: Op!n!on

wow...Op!n!on - good flow, nice rhyme scheme, nice punches...i liked the 3rd line the most..."If wack was dope, you wouldn't be a vet...you'd exceed them" that was kool...and ur last bar was nice, pretty creative..work on your vocab a bit tho...keep elevatin

the kid 523 - ur structure was horrible, it went all over the place, o flow whutsoever...sorry but,
"didnt wanna be the one u come and suicided too."
that doesnt really make sense...overall, u really gotta work on you flow and structure it was too hard to follow..jus work on that and u'll improve

v/ Op!n!on
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