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Old 03-17-05, 05:40 PM   #1
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Old 03-17-05, 05:53 PM   #2
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quality sounded good, beat was koo
intro was a tad long, flow was ok, delevery could use just a lil work
voice is ok
singing is ehh, its ok i guess
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Old 03-19-05, 07:05 PM   #3
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iight thanx.. uppin
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Old 03-19-05, 09:31 PM   #4
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20 Grand pretty much summed it up for me, the intro was a little long but the flow and delivery was alright but i didn't really dig the singing, but def. keep dropping
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Old 03-22-05, 10:43 PM   #5
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Old 04-03-05, 07:20 PM   #6
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Old 04-05-05, 02:10 AM   #7
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ok i'm peeping now...and you know that beats fire...ya voice is cool....singing was tight.....flow was straight....lyrics seemd pretty deep man...keep that up right there..i was feeling that man....nice track..

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Old 04-05-05, 03:41 AM   #8
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overall - 7/10

i liked this track...something for the females, ya flow could use a lil help and so could ya delivery...u sorta sounded like u were scared to sing as if u were confident...i liked this though...i have to say that i was feeling the hook...if u wanna collab sometime holla at me on AIM at Debit12188 or yahoo...

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Old 04-07-05, 02:44 PM   #9
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Nas feat. 2pac - Thugs Mansion [Acoustic] instrumental.
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Old 04-07-05, 07:47 PM   #10
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wtf is that shyt?? ^^ thats stupid?
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Old 04-09-05, 03:46 PM   #11
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wtf is that shyt?? ^^ thats stupid?

Just pointing out which beat you used. I like that beat.
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Old 04-09-05, 08:03 AM   #12
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I am not the best person to give criticism on the technical side of it all so I'ma just stick to the content and the feeling I got from this song.

I already told you I was really digging it and like OMB said, this wasn't a lyrical song. This was pure emotions brought to us so I don't feel there was a need for big vocab, I even think it would've just ruined the whole thing. I enjoy listening to your voice, your singing is very good and I bet every girl would love to get a song like this dedicated to her. I like the beat, the music...it really suits the topic and your singing as well. Quality is good, delivery might be slightly better but you had this vulnerable thing going on which I liked

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Old 04-09-05, 01:59 PM   #13
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hahaha thanx DQ!! Wen u gonna drop some audio?
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Old 04-09-05, 02:04 PM   #14
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Listening: 2Pac Thugs Mansion beat yea yea i LOOOOOOOOVE this beat...romantic stuff...nice rhyming...topically you on point...flow is nice...lol parents are scarey...hook was dope...the emotion is some of the best i have heard so far since listening on RV...props on this track you done well


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Old 04-09-05, 07:06 PM   #15
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Listening: 2Pac Thugs Mansion beat yea yea i LOOOOOOOOVE this beat...romantic stuff...nice rhyming...topically you on point...flow is nice...lol parents are scarey...hook was dope...the emotion is some of the best i have heard so far since listening on RV...props on this track you done well


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