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03-15-05, 02:56 PM
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03-15-05, 03:03 PM
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so ill. loved it.. loved it... loved it...
so many good things to say about this piece, word. i gotta collab idea. get at my pm page... pc.
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03-15-05, 08:45 PM
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03-16-05, 09:19 AM
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03-16-05, 10:04 AM
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IP: 5A5F 31AB
Love how the story progressed and how you managed to portray the situation in such a vivid, emotional yet powerful way.
Kept vocab quite simple which I liked because too high vocab can sometimes really affect the content of the piece but that wasn't the case here because you find a good balance. Was also definately feeling your flow and I absolutely LOVED the twist in the ending. I thought the guy had accepted the fact she was pregnant and then he does kill himself, that was a nice ending in my opinion. You kept switching back and forth between emotions and I'm sure as hell liking that. Great read and made me think about some stuff actually (<- if you can do that, you know this was damn good) DQ
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03-16-05, 10:13 AM
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IP: EED2 4F8F
This was really good 10/10 no doubt very thoughtfull and like evry1 sed hit emotions RTF plz
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03-16-05, 01:24 PM
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03-16-05, 04:03 PM
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IP: 3EFF 6749
^^ The fuck nigga? Stop stealing my style.......................
.................................................. .......bitch Lol j/p
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03-16-05, 06:19 PM
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You made up for the shoddy spelling with the deepest shit I'v read from you.
A real Em/Nas/Dyslexic mix there. Deep. that first verse is how i feel right now...
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03-17-05, 01:00 PM
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03-17-05, 07:04 PM
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03-17-05, 08:53 PM
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03-17-05, 08:57 PM
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hol on ..... Lemme Go and get some Pussy ....................................Aii Now im bout to cry
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03-18-05, 04:39 PM
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03-19-05, 03:51 PM
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Thanks for the lack of feed,preciate it.
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