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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
LyricalMa$tamind 5 71.43%
FaMe 2 28.57%
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Old 03-18-05, 03:19 AM   #16
MC Virtuoso
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Voted For: FaMe

punches:Fame
flow:Fame
multi's:LM
structure:Fame
vocab:Fame
Originality: Fame

lmao this lines like a compliment
cuz he's a pussy so i guess you really are what you eat/
sayin he gets pussy

Anyway Fame had this one fairly easy because of punches and LM you should have a different rhyming word every punch..

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Old 03-18-05, 05:16 AM   #17
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

mastermind win diz\ battle hiz flow wuz iight his punchez culd of been better but it wuz still tight
 
Old 03-18-05, 05:20 AM   #18
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This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind

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yo i heard your first four lines from somewher, you either bit them or you recyled your verse, so you loose, im not gonna go find out where you bit them but i know you did, LOL pitiful
 
Old 03-18-05, 10:21 AM   #19
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Not the strongets battle yall..
keep elevating both...

But, Mastamind came harder, few lines were stretched, learn ta get the point across quicker in ya lines LM, Straight stuff tho, somewhat witty, few decent metas n puns, okay wordplay for the most part
learn ta be more creative an consistant LM

Fame, ya had an aight verse also, u prolly had the best line in the battle with that paper clip, such a simple rhymes ta play off yet nobody uses it, an u did, an it hit well an made ya verse from whack ta alright, be more consistant an try n make every line a personal or punch
that goes for both of yall

But RTF In any of my battles ya see floatin around

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