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04-04-05, 03:12 PM
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 8155 9B30
not bad. should have extended it a little more. but not bad. pc
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04-04-05, 03:17 PM
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IP: E94B 4DDE
right You know how hard it is to write stuff like that?
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04-04-05, 03:31 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
i liked it, except for when you said nerdy geeks......haha, keep up
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04-04-05, 03:41 PM
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IP: E94B 4DDE
she likes it when I say stuff that make her laugh but yeah uppin.
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04-04-05, 07:33 PM
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IP: 9AC2 6A3A
uppin this shit.
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04-04-05, 10:22 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
[i]This was an okay drop, Could have been better..
Stucture was alittle off but,still readable... You had lots of feeling and nice emotions.. This was a good read, next time just elevate on your structure and you'll be good , overall keep it up
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04-05-05, 08:29 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 2DD2 FAE7
You and Katrina have the same style of writing............... odd...
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04-06-05, 05:55 PM
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IP: 3B28 D3D1
what you mean. I help her out. heh so don't get any ideas about her being imaginary.
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04-07-05, 01:39 AM
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uppin this shit....
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04-07-05, 04:54 PM
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IP: 488B CF81
uppin this shit.
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04-07-05, 07:09 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
your girls verse was blah yo, yours was alright, I dont like love songs though, soooo corny, but anyways, it was good, nice meta's, lined were a little stretched, but overall it was decent, not bad, good stuff, 7/10
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04-07-05, 07:33 PM
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ready 4 wuteva
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IP: F284 26B6
nice drop...here's wut stood out to me
-the flow was decent enough...it fell off in areas but nobody's perfect -there wasnt much raw emotion but everything that was said made sense -the hook was fire...use that in a audio or somethin -"Like a nerdy geeks grades my love for you is progressin": not a good comparrison to be honest....try somethin like " emotions take over when i see you i cant control my affection"...yet again it did make sense tho. overall i give this one a 6/10 keep droppin and RTF in my OM called Dream or reality.1.
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04-10-05, 04:47 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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04-10-05, 07:40 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 342A DA98
I liked this.. alot actually. Legand ASL!? PM me iight...
late sweft
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04-10-05, 08:06 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A14B AE90
legend this was a solid drop fam, real emotion, you can tell
this meant something to you, similies were koo n ya flow was on key for the most part.....definately a good piece fam...stay up...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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