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Old 04-17-05, 04:28 PM   #1
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It Was Ok...But You Should've Spit Some Better Punchlines...
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Old 04-17-05, 06:27 PM   #2
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aight drop

ya both got ya nice flowin shit, gud vocab in there and the structure was tight, not perfect but still dope..............J Dot's structure was pretty wack in places and overall i was feelin OSB's shit more but together it was a nice drop.

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Old 04-17-05, 06:52 PM   #3
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this was good. both need to work on your structure and up for vocab. other than that. your good.
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