uppin.... and for fucks sake i said he was calling me an herb.. i was sayin in his eyes thats what i am.. therefore he'd be losing to one or battling one for wins...

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i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck,
cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked..

^^^ya whole verse was ass until this, and this was absolutely the best punch of the battle


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Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone...
I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'...
That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation..
'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination
^^you had two real embarrasing punches though so you win... and your whole verse was alot more percistant than 1's

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good verse OSB i was feelin the closer and some nice punches in there. limited edition decent verse from u too
uppin for OSB..lets get some good votes in here.

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

votin for OneStepBeyond

One step got this due to a more creative series of punches

one-
Flow- nice flow i kept wit it easily
punches- creative i liked you opener alot
personals- descent personals come a lil harder neext time
strucutre nice
multies- didnt see any so elevate on those

i like this personal:
im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed,
Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest
(creative n hard hittin

Limited i think you came to basic with your verse

punches- seemed a lil to basic not hard hitting
personasl- hard hitting n creavtive but the punches wernt
strucutre- nce n descent
flow was good i kept with you

if ya punches woulda been harder u woulda had him but they wernt

he had strong punches n a hard hittin personal
u had hard personal n punches

one gets my vote

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nice drop osb anyways just checkin out the polls hope htis wont count asa votecuz last time it did...

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checkin the damn polls on this shit rigth here...should be good lol

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Voted For: Limited Edition

OneStep- your fence ish was cool... as well as the closer was feelin that.... but other than that your structure seems a bit stretched, and you just had mediocre punches besides the ones I cited...

Limited Edition- not bad... the Salisbury steak line had me laughin... and the rest were coo... had some coo nameplay in there that was augmented by a good structure and flow...


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Voted For: Limited Edition

Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone...
I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'...
kinda played here, but its still good
That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation..
'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination...
never seen this 1 b4, nice punch
You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare...
Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair...
weak punch here, not really feelin this one
What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great...
The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak...
nice
Dawg before you step up...better get some practices...
Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'...
decent closer

overall… you had a nice drop, those punches were hardhittin
all the way thru ur verse, except for 1 or you of them, but you
had a nice flow, good structure, & the punches were good overall
you had a nice drop… 7/10

you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend,
you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,*
weak
im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed,
Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest,
wha? Wack punch here
read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense,
you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence,
ur best line here
i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives,
us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives...
the wording was wack, punch was weak

overall… you had an aight drop, most of your punches were wack except
for 1.. ur structure was in place, the flow was pretty decent, and some multies
were aight, but overall elevate on ur punches, cuz those shits were weak no
hate though.. 5/10

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Voted For: Limited Edition

LE you got this easy as hell man your structure and wordplay were really nice.. i don;t even think the other guy is really on your level. but otherwise i just think that you did a very nice job with your delievery overall . you had alot of good punches and personals as well as vocab

one step your verse was to basic next time upp your vocab and get more creative with your personals and punches no hate though i just think you were out of your leauge

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