Voted For: Bonecollector

aight yo bonecollector took dis shit wit eaze he had betta punches hiz shit wasnt stretched like k'z he punches wasnt basic and dey hit harder den k'z he aint have no personals but his shit was eazy 2 read nigga had some ok wordplay sum aight vokab n he kept hiz shit aight threw da whole verse so he gets mah vote 4 dat

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Voted For: Bonecollector

this is a tough one. wasnt really feelin either of those rhymes. but...im gonna have to give this one to bone collector cause his at least wasnt corny. could use more personals though.

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Voted For: K-Trini

i think k-trini won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
bonecollector u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were pretty good

favorite k-trini lines:

You the only one the bartender punches for free,you got a lower level of vocabulary than a pre-school dictionary/

You act like you a playa but your spice without the flava,
You talk like ya got paper but ya occupation's a masterbater/

So You can go head and say my rhymes are whack cause I ain't black,But you can't deny the fact,that my rhymes have all that yours lack,and you feel lke ya got hit with a million tumtacks/

favorite bonecollector lines:
Wtf you ina rush to get a lose? Why dont you chill and reconcile..
Savior the moment , cuz battlin' Bone only comes one ina while..
You bitching Cuz im taken to long,Kneel down and forgive!?
Cuz You should be happy im giving you more time to live..
Cuz you aint surviving this battle...Aint no doubt..
Cuz accepting this battle was something you should thought about..

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Voted For: Bonecollector

Wtf you ina rush to get a lose? Why dont you chill and reconcile..
Savior the moment , cuz battlin' Bone only comes one ina while..
Weak opener, kinda filler to!!
You bitching Cuz im taken to long,Kneel down and forgive!?
Cuz You should be happy im giving you more time to live..
Nah!! not feelin it!!
Cuz you aint surviving this battle...Aint no doubt..
Cuz accepting this battle was something you should thought about..
bleh!! what's wrong, u droppin weak!!
Cuz ill leave you slain and ina critical Condition....
Shyt ill have your record looking worse then Limited Edition..
Nice!! this bar was pretty funny!!
I'll come weak , and still have you looking Dumb..
Cuz my punch's u'll have ya mouth more twisted then sour gum
ok line!!
Am done playing with fools ...So Pay your repect..
Cuz all the voters are about to be a Muder Suspect..
decent closer!!


I attack so vicously,leaving ya ears in need of alchohol,
You more ridiculous than a Punjabi playing basketball/
wtf!! this is wack!! makes no sense!!
With a turban on the head,bigger than ya moma's breasts,but smaller than the jugs on ur father's chest/
bleh!!! weak as hell!!
I'm swetter than the doughnuts a cop eats while on paroll,I'm so deep I quench the thirst for the soul,You lost this battle from the start like a T.V.'s remote control/
not feelin it.....come harder!!
You the only one the bartender punches for free,you got a lower level of vocabulary than a pre-school dictionary/
nice try, but not done rite, cud be better!!
You act like you a playa but your spice without the flava,
You talk like ya got paper but ya occupation's a masterbater/
ok, not funny!!
So You can go head and say my rhymes are whack cause I ain't black,But you can't deny the fact,that my rhymes have all that yours lack,and you feel lke ya got hit with a million tumtacks/~1~
best part of the verse...but still weak!!

ok this battle was wack as hell, no offense but both came weak in this. bones, u were weak to begin with, but came up wit a couple of nice lines to the end which gets u this battle. K-Trini u were just weak all the way thru, first bar was just nonsense, the rest were understandable but very weak, especially the closer, that shit was pathetic!!! i may sound harsh, but u need to elevate hella lot, work on everything really!!!

V/ - Bonecollector

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Voted For: Bonecollector

I gotta give it to Bonecollector. I felt both MC's could have done alot better. Bone's Had some punches that made sence and was well organized. And trini had some punches that came out of no where and was just straight up sloppy. It was a close battle but my vote goes to Bone. But both artists need to step they jab game up. Bone needs to put more power in his jabs and trini needs to Aim his shots better.

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Voted For: Bonecollector

Easy decision here.. Collector easily takes this one...

K-Trini- You have some potential man, but u need some elevation.. Ya lines were stretched, and at times you tried fittin 3 lines in a bar, which dont work...You had some nice lines tho still, like the Basketball line and the dictionary line.. shit was decent.. I didn't understand the Remote control line.. like i said you came decent at best, some way stretched barz and jus amateur wordplay and complexity.. come wit more personals too...

Bonecollector- Nice verse from you... more than enuff to take the win.. Opener was nice, but ya second line killed Trini's whole verse.. lol nice shit... You stayed consistent after that, with the sour gum line, and ya closer was nice too... Ya 2nd line in ya opener was kinda self-glorification, but it didn't take away from your verse... you had nice wordplay and real nice punches, wit nice struc and flow throughout...

Overall, Colector takes this shit wit better and harder hitten punches, and just a harder hittin verse... Trinin try to elevate with more complexity and personals in your verse, cuz u got some potential...

V/Bonecollector

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Voted For: Bonecollector

Wtf you ina rush to get a lose? Why dont you chill and reconcile..
Savior the moment , cuz battlin' Bone only comes one ina while..
decent-7/10
You bitching Cuz im taken to long,Kneel down and forgive!?
Cuz You should be happy im giving you more time to live..
ok 6/10
Cuz you aint surviving this battle...Aint no doubt..
Cuz accepting this battle was something you should thought about..
ehh... 5/10
Cuz ill leave you slain and ina critical Condition....
Shyt ill have your record looking worse then Limited Edition..
decent 7/10
I'll come weak , and still have you looking Dumb..
Cuz my punch's u'll have ya mouth more twisted then sour gum
lol 7/10
Am done playing with fools ...So Pay your repect..
Cuz all the voters are about to be a Muder Suspect..
lol 7/10

Overall-7/10

I attack so vicously,leaving ya ears in need of alchohol,
You more ridiculous than a Punjabi playing basketball/

wtf? i know punjabi ppl who play ball 2/10

With a turban on the head,bigger than ya moma's breasts,but smaller than the jugs on ur father's chest/

wtf? 1/10

I'm swetter than the doughnuts a cop eats while on paroll,I'm so deep I quench the thirst for the soul,You lost this battle from the start like a T.V.'s remote control/

wow that was bad 3/10

You the only one the bartender punches for free,you got a lower level of vocabulary than a pre-school dictionary/

lol wow 3/10

You act like you a playa but your spice without the flava,
You talk like ya got paper but ya occupation's a masterbater/

3/10

So You can go head and say my rhymes are whack cause I ain't black,But you can't deny the fact,that my rhymes have all that yours lack,and you feel lke ya got hit with a million tumtacks/~1~

tumtacks? hahahaha thumbtacks 4/10

Overall-3/10

Bonecollector took this, his bars actually made sense and he had stronger punches. He simpley killed this rookie.

My Vote-Bonecollector

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