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Old 04-07-05, 09:25 PM   #16
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dope... you know what I say. 9/10
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 04-10-05, 05:02 PM   #17
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oh shit son, dope fucking piece here, rofl, I wrote something similiar I swear man, lol, but I didnt get it from you though, peep it though, you'll see, mine is what Lucifer was thinking when he was condemed to hell, it's in the sig, "Journey to the Abyss" nice drop though yo, good flow... peep me, I think you'd be interested, 8/10 ~ 1


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Old 04-10-05, 05:59 PM   #18
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i like these kinda've drops, makes ya think.....
flow was on point, i was feeling every bar in this whole piece
..damn, its one of those verses you can read 3 times(i did)
n still not get sick of it........nice job ...enjoyed the read
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Old 06-25-05, 03:06 AM   #19
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[FONT=Tahoma]My life is based on, a war thats raged on..
profound thoughts mixed with scorching napalm..
Teachers and prophets, all burned and forgotten..
even the wheels of time are turnin and plottin..
Blasphamous statements leavin truth trapped in a basement..
it's amazing what a person can do with there back to the pavement..


But Lucifer questioned no one, and accepted his place..
as God's left hand man, a warlord with armor and mace..
He would be commander of angels, a valiant soldier of God..
and the book of genesis was a chosen facade..
all the angels of heaven, equipped with flaming swords..
were cast down to the earth, to become lame and whores..
Now it was just Lucifer and God, and the assumption shot in..
If Lucifer was to detrhone, there was no stoppin him..
Too prideful to destroy any creation, he cast him down aswell..
and Lucifer was so confused, he vowed to make life living hell..
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WOw...beautyfull written seriously. This is more of a biblical prespective i like how u really got deep in this. emotions were good cuz u put it out as your own oppinion.
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Old 06-25-05, 03:49 PM   #20
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yo this was crazy i raeally didnt know that there was ne body this nice o the site got damn this is really hot man the whole thin gis a quotable thank u..for this read
i want to collab with u if u have any i deas hit me up
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 03-08-06, 08:10 PM   #21
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uppin this because i want to
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Old 04-26-06, 01:15 AM   #22
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upping....getting tired of this shot not getting feedback
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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.


"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox


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