lmaoo look u spit a 100 lines n nuff of em were hott datz sad....y would 50 call a cops on black child....i saw a dvd called beef u probly was watchin dat but ya dumb ass didn't understand it and i wanna see u cum da queens niggaz a break ya fukkin face u lil pussy...dis between u n me u rappin bout 50 like u know da nigga lol

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

V/Marvjay1009.....this was a good battle by both but marv gets my vote he came wit good personals an punchs wit vocab.....Armada u had a good verse wit sum good punchs but u werent consistent wit them some were real basic an played.........No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=M
closer=m
structure=m
punchs=m
vocab=m
personals=m
overall=Marvjay1009

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blah.... didnt see how his punches were better then mine....cuz they wernt, hardest thing i seen him say was i started 0-5 which I didnt n referred to me beatin texaco hmm but o well thx for votin atleast its gettin voted on

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

yall niggas was writing stories. i didnt finish armada's, i aint gon lie. i had about 6 more lines to go tho. i was leaning towards marv anyway, thats why. his was more structured and better worded. (wordplaY). i think he came harder on punches. i wouldnt be suprised if he was the punchline king of RV. armada-u had some ok lines, but a lot of em was unneccessary. u started off ok, but then near the middle and the end, it started to get boring. i wasnt feelin it at all. structure and flow was a lil off.
i gave my vote to marv because i felt he came harder and had some better disses and punches in there, and his verse didnt put me to sleep. one sided battle..


v/marv

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

I'll break this down.
Marv: You had a nice consistent verse, hard hitting punches 7/10. Flow was av. So 5/10 fir flow. Best line I think was..
pause!..so you betta invest,"iN-VEST" like da "NaS DaQ".....
4 wins lmaooooo on my first day ob RV nigga i pass dat......
Overall 7.5/10.
Armada: You didn't come hard at all, you had a nicer flow, but your ounches weren't connecting. Some lines seemed forced, and your punches werent consistent enough to get the win. I think your best line was...
MaRVJay? Lets leave at that, Armada callin you a phoney
Ya gonna have to pay cats 1009 times,not to drop a vote for me
Overall 4/10.
V/Marv.

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Voted For: Armada Da 187

voting for Armada Da 187

ight Armada Da 187 got this due to way beta punches

Punches- Armada Da 187 had them,and dey wer hard hittin punches
Flow- dunno both good
Structure- both quite good
Personals- Armada Da 187 got the perosnals.
Multies- i cant rememba who got dis :S


good battle form the both of you but Armada Da 187 gets the vote due to perosnals n harder punches

GOOD BATTLE FROM BOTH, KEEP IT UP !!!!!!!

lol u didn't say anything about my verse fam.....

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

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yo y everything is ya sig has my name on it lol..u luvin me now fam

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

no hate marv took this one. better punches, and better structure to his verse. i was feelin urs better. i think tha first coupld barz took his whole verse, but w/e. closin bars was kinda wack and didnt flow too well, but i think you took this one. hands down...

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(and I returned that, even tho u voted against me, so dont say i didnt)

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

my vote goes to marv his punches hit harder i liked the personals he was using it was a well put together verse, armada ur verse was alright some of ur punches were kinda pointless because they didnt hit hard at all and just made ur verse long and dragged out but there were a few lines that were alright. but overall marv had this because of the fact that he kept comin wit more creative punches/personals

return the favor with an honost vote:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185386

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