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caspers punchelines were direct and hit harder then mad knights did mad knight u came pretty weak with ur verse ya had basic vocab and ur ounchelines were used and tired ur verse was really boring to read no hate though keep workin ull get better

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lol dickrider? i don't think so... i dropped a honest vote...and since when do newbs have dickriders?

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Voted For: CA$per

Mad, bad verse overall. work on your punches. they were just weak as crap. one didnt make sense, and the rest were statements or just plain weak. personals sucked, you did a wordplay which wasnt that creative, and the casper line is weak.

casper, work on your punches as well. your personals were weak, especially the graphics line. you started to diss wordman, but this is a battle betwene you and mad. overall, work on your punches and wordplay.

v-casper

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uppin this battle............................................ .

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Voted For: CA$per

MaD_KnighT

You spit slow dan slugs, but my slugs cum out 10 times faster/
U even step on dis site was rap verses worst diaster/
^1st line's bleh, second was good

Im da bitch dat killed casper, while spittin a verse//
Dat bitch came 2 haunt me but now im his curse//
hmmm, decent decent

Wen i cut ur skinny white head off,u'll luk like casper fat n see through/
All ya M.O.B homies will cya n shout 'WHO DA FUK ARE YOU'/
hehe,this one was funny

Me n my peeps plled up in ur hood, n we heard u n ur bitches ran//
Now tell me wat da fuk does M.O.B. stand 4 Mob Of Bitches klan//
^good closer

Okay battle here! You started off quite hesitating in my opinion, not that funny or hardhitting punches at the start but afterwards you picked up the pace real well. The flow was good, vocabulary was okay, might be improved a little but nothing too bad though. Structure was okay, personals were nice and punches were good. Not always too creative maybe but you had some funny stuff in there. Overall good verse...


CA$per

u think u can win son,?u better step up your game.....
imma make ya momz go back to her maiden name....
^hehe,good opener

you lookin for a sig,but you even to new for graphicz....
imma leave you mourning,like tha pope with all them catholics
okay okay

your ryming skillz,aint tha worst ive seen.........
its just too bad you got merked on your daily routine...
decent

why dont u just chill,have sum milk and cookies.....
and i only say that,cause i know u too young for pussy...
funny shit

u just got squashed,like a pimple on wordmans grill....
u and him should do tha same,invent a suicide pill......
lmao, dope closer

Nice verse, you stayed consistent with the punches which were creative and hardhitting most of the time. I laughed at some of those, personals were okay and the structure was cool. The vocab might be a little better but that didn't affect the content of your verse. I was feeling your flow, just try to get some more personals and higher vocab next time maybe but I definitely enjoyed reading your verse.

In the end my vote goes to CA$per because he stayed consistent with the punches, started off with dope stuff right away unlike MaD_KnighT who had to warm up first

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Voted For: CA$per

yo u killed him pretty good shit i like the catholics part that was my fav line...keep it up

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uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

just checkn the polls since he is in my crew
aight

no but it wasnt an honest vote tha vets say i killed him but u and other dude say i lost com on turban be real u know i won anyway we boiz turban so i aint sayin no more

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Voted For: CA$per

yo.. not the best battle i seen but it was aiight....
this how i saw it...
casper... you had some good ideas, a decent flow, nice punches includin the wordman one.. lol thats funny, ur structure was good just work on that a bit more, the complexity was a bit simple. you had good vocabulary and not many mulits.... 7/10

Mad.... your verse was alot more simple, didnt flow as well as caspers, your punches were sorta weak and ur structure needs improvment.. vocab needs to be extended on same with the complexity... no hate.. u want help just ask me

opener - mad
closer - casper
flow - casper
structure - casper
punches - casper
complexity - casper
v/ casper... no hate homie..
enjoyment - casper

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Voted For: CA$per

Weak battle overall.

Ca$per:
Weak, not that creative and played punches. Mom punch, catholic punch, pussy punch. You gotta be more creative man. Your personal was bad, cuz I made him a sig and the graphic personal is just bad overall. All you really did was state things, and many were fake personals. Work on your punches and personals. Also, why did you diss wordman in the last line?

Mad Knight:
Fake personals, bad punches, bad metas, only decent thing was your flow. Work on real personals, no we came to your block ish. Your metas were weak, and your wording was horrible. Work on getting your wording to where people can actually understand your verse. Overall you need to work on wording, punches, and not using fake personals.

Overall both of you need to elevate soon. Your personals were either fake, or weak. Punches were bad as was the vocab. I give this to Ca$per for harder and more consistant punches.

v- Ca$per

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