^^ Alright thanx.............................................

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Vs Stanza

"An eye for an eye only leaves the world blind" - Mahatma Ghandi

Da king-He got this just by using words that rhyme an understandable punchez(seem sorta used before?).
This battle didnt really have any good personals,but
Ghand did have a lil personals...but..lacked any structure or Shit!!!...Didnt rhyme doggz..Hah!!

Best line-*so please stop thinking that you downing me
cause i'm the king you was just holding the crown for me*
(only cuz Playa Fly said somethan real close to it!?!)
Hah!!!

Fuck a vote!!!!..this is FeedBack!!

Keep elevatin..both of yallz...cuz this battle couldve been better!!!

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Voted For: Mahatma Ghand

Wow Im Enjtoying this one sided battle thing going on rii hurr

King

You came very short and very basic i think you need to reconsider what you do or How you do it bcuz that verse jus wasnt kickin to me I think you are jus tryin to Make it ryme instead of makin it have a good effect on your oppenent and if you cant do both then i think you need to reconsider your career

Ghand

Well mayn you Did very well Infatc i dont see why you wasted such a good verse on such an easy battle ?....... N e ways i feel all and/or most of your punchez connected with ease and flourishness........

RTF In the link in my sig PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU

Voted For: Mahatma Ghand

holy shit........
mahatma ghand had this shit..
his verse owns...
vocab=8/10
structure=7/10
punches=10/10 good battle next time be better..

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uppin........................................come on mutha fuckaz vote

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Voted For: Mahatma Ghand

easy battle............

mahs punches wer funny and actually hit, structure was ok, overall good flow....The personals won him this battle.

king your punches didnt realy make sense so didnt hit, i suggest you hit up a tutorial.. no hate

rtf in sig.

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aight what eva. i read yo battles and they wasn't that damn hot either. fuck a tutorial. since u so good why don't you school me. oops u probably aint got time since you on mahs dick. uppin........................vote mutha fuckaz. and think about yo vote. o yea my punches did make sense. u niggas just not advanced.

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