Voted For: diman

i was feeling diman's more, thought it went more deep....although both had good emotion, thought dimans was better.......yeah, it was kinda sad too, which added to the effect....pure emotion.....dabatos, i thought your vocab and wordplay was too basic, and too away alot from your verse.......but still, both wrote good verses and enjoyable to read, keep up

v/diman

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