nice flow even if i didn't loved the structure

nice wordplay
vocab was perfect
u need a bit of creativity
kinda like a freestyle.... keep it up

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Bizzacckkk

this was pretty good. there wer some hot punchlines in there and i was feelin ya flow alot. ya structure wasnt hard to follow at all. cuz thats how do my bars sometimes idk what erebody else complainin about. but overal it was straight. it woulda been good verse for an Open mic or suttin. holla at me or my boy hitchcock for a collabo
........return the favor...
links in the sig

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OM's

this was a hot drop fam, nice flow good multis, i like these,

niggas all about liftin glocks,
when half dey guns "hold no keys" so dey weapons "locked"...
"religious gats" that "uplift a shot",
bodies quick 2 drop, afta bein "submerged in blood" like "liquid clots"...
broke niggas brag but don't hold no knots,
blank image don't get ya photo shot,
PreZ not slow...u'll get "punched in time" like an "abusive watch"...
mental collapses, u might wanna "fall back" i got a "clumsy past"...
mouth moved?? son u'll get harassed,
hungry enuff 2 "empty stomachs" 4 weeks n force ya "esophagus 2 fast!"...
u faggots "RuPaul on da inside"....on da outside u jus "look like a man!"...
high profit....when i spit my lyrics da ppl demand,
dis "jerk" not cass but got "split personalities" cuz he like to "switch hands!"...
short free, da niggas "below comprehension" probably wont "UNDERstand"...


i had to quote the whole thing since i like the whole thing hella drop keep it up maybe we can collabo sometime...

omg people actually like this piece but when i rap now nobody appreciates it, okay i see what i gotta do now lol return to this old style

AX DOGG <-- feel u, this is real old though when i first came here so thanx
BIG CITY <-- get at me for a collab homie
FRAUD <-- much respect, if u wanna collab on a drop note me

Pretty nice shit. Been a long time since you've been on here.

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

chea during tha summer i was busy, went away, came back recently so i just stopped comin online but i'm here now...whats goin on man?

Decent Lil drop you haver here prez...Nice muli' with flow and the best aspect in your verse was the wordplays..very creative with words..Nice..I don't care about structure so I won't crit you on that...But keep on writing Nice lil decent drop with good flow and Wordplays..

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