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04-19-05, 08:03 PM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: 3078 E863
bumped to tha top........................
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04-19-05, 08:07 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
yea casper.. u really doin ur shit
i like the diversity of the topic as opposed to your other drops .. just dont get too soft on us lol 7.5/10 good job.. keep it up
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04-19-05, 10:35 PM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: 3078 E863
uppin this shit.......................to tha top
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04-19-05, 11:08 PM
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Hmm...this was a'ight...vocab was decent...flow was a lil off, you need some work on your structure...decent story...keep at it...
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04-19-05, 11:36 PM
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IP: 3078 E863
bump......................................
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04-20-05, 01:28 AM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: 3078 E863
bump.............................................. ....
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04-20-05, 12:08 PM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: 3078 E863
uppin to tha top yall..............................
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04-20-05, 04:10 PM
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ready 4 wuteva
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IP: B7E3 FC91
this was a decent drop...structure was off in one or two places and tha hook couldda been better but nobody's perfect....ya verses really stayed on topic and created a good image of wut u was goin thru. stay up & rtf.1.
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04-20-05, 04:20 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Yo nice shit homie........yo i have a OM called da same thing Hard Times by Me ft.Buck.Shot and LyricalFlowz....heres da link leave some feed back homie....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181030 ~1~
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04-20-05, 05:25 PM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: 3078 E863
uppin to the top.............................................
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04-20-05, 07:12 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: CFFD F596
yo pretty good better than some of ur other ones a lil basic but otherwise really good 7/10 keep it up
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04-20-05, 07:55 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 456B 347F
pretty ill stuff Casper, nice creative lines with dope wordplay, not much i can fault on the peice ta be real wit'cha homeboy..
only flaw is the hook, sorry...wasnt feeling it, seemed a little...corny? lol, no offence, the verses was right on point...an the hook dosent matter anyway, i enjoyed it 7.5/10 look forward ta our collab man..
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04-21-05, 07:14 PM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: 3078 E863
uppin to tha top!!!!!!!
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05-20-05, 12:52 PM
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IP: 2D1D 693F
bump to tha top............................................... ........
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05-20-05, 12:57 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
This was a decent drop.. could have been alot better.. if
you would have used some creativity.. "Hard times".. A very commen topic, but you didnt express in good wording , how hard those times were , and what happen to you in those times You did say why it was hard times , but i just felt you could have elaborated more Structure was off, it wasnt hepling the reader at all.. Vocab and worplay usuage was decent, but could have been alot better. ..keep it up
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