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lyrical clarity 0 0%
Ill-Grammatix 5 100.00%
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Old 04-24-05, 04:35 AM   #16
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

without a doubt, ill g got this,...lyrical clarity..hmm damn you suck.nah seriously you need alot of elevatin, ya shit was the opposite of creativity , n ive read better from 8 year old rappers....this is a pathetic battle,..ig murdered you........
in all catagories......get ya punches up. structure sound n ya ya flow flowing.....im done....ig ide say props but you could killed this killed with ya first bar...FULL STOP
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 04-24-05, 06:49 PM   #17
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bumpin this...............let's close this crap out already...thanks
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Old 04-25-05, 10:11 AM   #18
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

I think Ill took this with better structure, harder punches, and better personals. Lyrical Clarity had a good verse, but it was too long with lines that werent needed. Also, yo verse was boring, which took major points away from your vote. I felt like ur structure was off also. I give this one to Ill Grammatix. He just came out on top in this one to me and his lines seemed a lil bit more though of. Also, Ill's personals could only be used against one person, Lyricals', most of em could have been said towards anybody. I think Ill came out on top like I said...
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Old 04-25-05, 12:42 PM   #19
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werd...good looking out...one more can close this ....bumpity-bump....ya heard?!!!!
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Old 04-25-05, 04:48 PM   #20
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

lol @ the rules haa... k now the battle at hand,
Lyrical Clarity:
you had a lotta multis but your lines are VERY stretched, the majority of your lines are filler and you just kept rambling about nothing.

Ill Gramma:
i like the first bar very creative, with the "lower category" part lol @ the fact you used his initials throught the verse
your second bar was a stretched as well.. next bar is almost a filler (at the end).. LOL @ the "it took him day to drop"..

v/ Gramma for a least getting personal and not just random spittin..
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