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Solo 5 55.56%
Mike Lowery 4 44.44%
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Old 04-25-05, 02:27 PM   #1
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Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)
TITE FEW LINES......
The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…
GOOD....
^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…
LOL
Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…
SWEET......
Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…
LOL
=9/10 A REALLY TITE VERSE 1 OF DA BEST IVE SEEN SUM REALLY GOOD PUNCHES IN THERE

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I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
OK......
His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
SO-SO......
This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
NOT GOOD.....NOT EVEN A PUNCH....
If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
OK.......
You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
OK BUT YA STRUCTURE IS OFF......
This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L
OK........
= 7/10 AN OK VERSE, NOT REALLY MANY GOOD OR HARD PUNCHES!!!!!

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Old 04-28-05, 09:34 PM   #2
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This was seriously incredibly fucking horrible. Still using links? Just stop trying, please.
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Old 04-23-05, 01:51 PM   #3
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omg....i didn't know that was u...stupid spul
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Old 04-23-05, 05:47 PM   #4
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upppppppppppppppppppp............................. ...........................................
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Old 04-23-05, 07:47 PM   #5
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Voted For: Mike Lowery

lmao pretty decent battle i honestly thought king solo had this but spul (mike) had some good lines tough battle it rele came down to a line from each verse witch i though spul had the better off the lines so ima break it down..

flow-spul
punches-tie
complexity-ehh rele neither
personals-both
creativity-both
enjoyed-both
vote-Mike Lowery

once again no hate king solo me an you tight been tight this virtue by tha way just votin honestly..=1=

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Old 04-23-05, 09:09 PM   #6
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just checking polls.................................
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Old 04-23-05, 09:11 PM   #7
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o and decree please do not vote flow on text, ya cant have flow on text!!!!!!
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Old 04-23-05, 09:42 PM   #8
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^yes you can...i read tha verse like i was recordin it you cant have streched fuckin lines cause if you did it rele wouldnt be rap it be a story that rhymed that whole flow shit is a net hoax so people who got voted against could have suttin to bitch about..
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Old 04-24-05, 12:58 PM   #9
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................................*bump*............ ............................
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Old 04-24-05, 04:06 PM   #10
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Voted For: Mike Lowery

Mike Lowery

I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
^hehe, played his location off real well

His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
^dope personal

This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
^funny shit

If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
^lmao, nice playing off his name

You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
^coo coo

This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L
^good closer

Dope verse right here, had your vocab and flow on lock. Structure was good and your punches were creative. But best aspect of your battle were those dope personals, man...had me laughing with stuff, like the opener..was straight fire! Good going man


SoLo

Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
^lmao, nice personal opener

As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)
^aight aight

The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…
^nice bar

^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…
^haha, funny shit

Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…
^last line is dope, first's bleh

Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…
^okay closer, no punch though

Good verse here as well, was feeling your flow. Structure and vocab were on point. Had good original punches and some mad personals that hit quite hard but sometimes it lacked bit of consistency, well only in last part actually. But you had some dope ass lines in there for sure, played the whole Mike thing...

Damn, this is hard battle to vote on...because you both brought top A game...but in the end my vote goes to Mike Lowery for making me laugh a little bit more but this was so fucking close! No hate guys, was dope battle!
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Old 04-24-05, 04:36 PM   #11
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aiight props for feed. uppppppppppppppppinnnnn....... hot ass battle battle of the month fashos ...............
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Old 04-24-05, 04:46 PM   #12
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2 close to vote, both verses were straight fire!! ima vot on this for best battle for sure.
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Old 04-24-05, 04:54 PM   #13
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aight i'm a bump this shit now............................

but i just wanna state that yea it is a close battle but if ya just gonna post up on here sayin it is too close to vote on then dont bother..............we need votes hoez!!!!
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Old 04-24-05, 05:05 PM   #14
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lol @ the DML line omg i thought people forgot about them being freepost King and Queen.. lmao haaaaa wow both y'all got hot verses this time through good luck to both...
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Old 04-24-05, 05:41 PM   #15
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Voted For: Mike Lowery

mike definately took this one IMO...he had more creative harder hitting punches....the other guy..solo...didnt come as good as ML did
solo-ur structure was off....it was hard to read and the first couple lines were not all that easy to understand(structure wise)vocab was missin a lil from both competitors...
mike lowery-you had a better organized verse...you transitioned your punches well and your punches hit harder in my opinion

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