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Valor 5 62.50%
l i n e . 3 37.50%
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Old 04-28-05, 11:49 AM   #16
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^^ Word uppin............................................
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Old 04-28-05, 02:13 PM   #17
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RTF please.........damn, like all the battles in efl
include my fam, this was like the only 1 i could vote on..
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so im kinda countin on you's to return the favor...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 04-28-05, 08:49 PM   #18
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upppzin...........valor i like you avy.....................



..ps. ive been naked this whole time.
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Old 04-29-05, 09:28 PM   #19
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valor-

originality isnt really there. its sorta what you predict from the topic. I perssonaly like drops that bring a whole new twist to the topic.
rhymes could be alot better,emotion is ok. but I think YOU could of done alot better on this. Content is as allready stated, This is too close to the topic, if you feel me? theres isnt much creativity abou tit. you simply took the topic and ran with it..instead of thinking how to bend the topic as far as possible to bring more creativity into it.

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good solid drop! so many lines in here that i want to qoute. Alot of imagery in it, too much creativity for one person to handle.... you brought a good original angle to this topic. lyrics are solid, flow is good but the creativity and originality took this for you.
this line is dope!---Becoming a priest in my mind… funerals jumping from all sides
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Old 04-29-05, 09:33 PM   #20
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Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight thanx for the honest vote Fi-Del........Uppin
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Old 04-30-05, 08:30 AM   #21
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Aight Check It..

Valor: 6/10
I Wasn't So Much Feeling The Wording of Your Peice. The Vocab Was Alright, but Your Way Too Basic With Creativity and Imagination. You Need To Work On Structure Also.

Line: 7/10
I Liked The Direction You Took With This, and The Imagery You Put Into This Verse. Your Vocabulary Is Decent and Some Lines Were Outta Place, but Besides That The Overall Feel of This Drop Wasn't Bad.

Vote: Line for better overall topical drop.

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Old 04-30-05, 02:59 PM   #22
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uppin.............................................
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Old 04-30-05, 10:25 PM   #23
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Old 05-02-05, 02:57 PM   #24
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uppin this.............................................
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Old 05-03-05, 04:39 PM   #25
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Alright yo let's get some votes in here...........................
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Old 05-05-05, 12:13 PM   #26
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uppin this........................................
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Old 05-06-05, 03:39 PM   #27
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Old 05-08-05, 10:31 PM   #28
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i should up this
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Old 05-11-05, 03:00 PM   #29
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comeon scuzz bags vote
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Old 05-12-05, 06:02 AM   #30
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oooooooooooopppppppppppppssssssss my bad............

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