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Old 05-03-05, 04:45 PM   #1
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stop Complaining...and The Score Is 3-2 In Favor Of Ambient...the Voting Council Needs To Get Their Ass In Here...
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Old 05-03-05, 06:38 PM   #2
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sorry im late.....ok here is the breakdown

V/Ambient....

Wicked Clown overall your verse had the better vocab but your punches werent that strong in my opinion. You like were rhyming but didnt really hit him with the punches...you had punches but they werent really directed at him...your flow and structure was good...just didnt come real hard wit da punches...

Ambient, you get my vote because your punches were directional and hit hard.. you had good creativity with your punches a lot of originality from you and wicked had some too....your flow was good and structure was good also....

Wicked Clown-some tips for you is too get more deep and personal when batteling someone..i think u could have came harder but you tried to sound more educational than lyrical

Ambient-some tips for you is to use just a tad lil bit better vocab and maybe re-word some punches to make them look more built up and finish it off with a good punch..

V/Ambient.......
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Old 05-03-05, 08:29 PM   #3
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Rofl @ Wickedclown getting votes.

This site's voting blows. (Excluding the people who voted for the actual winner.)

Fucka voting council..

I'll post where I want.
 
Old 05-03-05, 09:29 PM   #4
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memisis u can suck my dick u faggot.. ill eat your children bitch
 
Old 05-03-05, 10:25 PM   #5
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^^fuckin violent....lol..
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Old 05-04-05, 02:31 AM   #6
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Battle Closed

Ambient Wins 4-2
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