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Old 04-28-05, 10:00 PM   #1
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I Thought U Was Gone To Tha Movies Lmfao...................
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Old 04-28-05, 10:01 PM   #2
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aiyo Armada drop feed in my OM it's gettin mad slept on dawg..i ripped dis cat like it was nothin
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Old 04-28-05, 10:03 PM   #3
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^^sure U Did Wheres Tha Link Homie So I Can Seee Tha Rippin....
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Old 04-28-05, 10:03 PM   #4
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ahhh movies didnt work out to late of showing time so we jus went shoppin
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Old 04-28-05, 10:04 PM   #5
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Old 04-28-05, 10:10 PM   #6
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its tha 3rd post from tha top..it says TG
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Old 04-28-05, 11:16 PM   #7
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This was pretty nice peice..
It was good , i felt it could have been alittle better..
You had nice structure..and some okay punchlines..
I felt you could have used better punchlines , and less fillers..
Elevate your wordplay, and your vocab ,...
Overeall this was an okay diss i felt it could have been alot better...
Keep it up , and you'll elevate over time ..

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Old 04-30-05, 12:17 PM   #8
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Old 05-01-05, 05:30 PM   #9
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