Voted For: Daubs

...E...'s verse

this Daubs 15 years old kid without life clue,
ur crew living legendz keep u gether like white glue...
Wack opener, wack line, wack all of the above. Just Wack!

thats mens sperm u suck mens dick like ur wifes do...
iv seen urs and mads verse and thats bad,u have that,
rhymes like my ass lack,talk to smash crap,i slash back...
Like u piss me whach ur metaphores,
diss me ye watewa whore.....
Shit, I don't know where the bar breakdown is, so this was also wack. Wait, that would make your whole verse wack? :LAUGH: Damn kid, you need to elevate alot

Yo dawg, I think you need to work on alot. At least try to rhyme. You verse was mad simple B. You should also work alot on your structure. This verse lacked in every category.
opener
structure
flow
punches
mettas
personals
rhyming
etc.
I didn't see a damn thing in yo verse that even made me think about giving you my vote.


daubs verse

You had "one shot" to accept this, but at first ya chose to reject it..
Saw ya user title and avater....aint it time you got off ems dick!!
This was an ight opener, but advice: 'We can't see his avatar'. The flow was wayy off. Just re-read that line to yourself and see if it sounds right.

I personally dont think i should scare you, but obviousely my rhymes do.. ..E.. sounds kinda like a hallucination pill, so i got reasons to pop you!!
This rhymed good, but not a punch, and not a good personal. Also, your structure was off. Go vote on dope battlers and see how there structure is...They break there lines down.


Eventually accepted.......but begged for only 6 lines..
Crooked like a pirate.........so i bet he spits blind!!
Not a good closer either. At least your structure elevated here!

This was not a good verse, yet alone a good battle, but I give daubs the win, because I felt he has more expierence and potential. I felt E had a verse where he didn't do good in any category and needs to elevate in alot, whereas daubs had good structure, and hust needs to be more creative with punches and personals and mettas and shit. Daubs gets my vote because of better structure


And please RTF on battle link in sig....Thank You!

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