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Lay-Text 4 50.00%
John Holmes 4 50.00%
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Old 05-04-05, 08:32 PM   #16
N.Tavarez
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SHOULD BE CLOSE....................................

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Old 05-04-05, 08:33 PM   #17
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ooopppss my bad lay and cali, get that removed.....my fault
 
Old 05-04-05, 09:00 PM   #18
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Voted For: Lay-Text

man this was a close ass battle.. i think Lay gets it. the non-existent line was really nice.. i liked the God line too.. cali u came with nice lines and i really am kinda worried about the Korv battle.. but to be honest i think lay got this just with harder punches.. both of u came really creative... it was really close to call.. the only thing that gives lay this is his punches were just wittier and a little comical.. the flow and structure on all that shit was pretty even like i said punches get this.. alot of personals from both.. but damn.. this is hard to do.. but lay gets it cause of punches.. no hate pz..
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Old 05-05-05, 03:24 PM   #19
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im votin fo ley-text. lay-text had sum dope punches. ^^..^^'s wuz aight, but nuthin special. u both had good flow, good structure. no hate tho ^^..^^, i just liked lay-texts shit betta, nom sizlaxin? werd

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Old 05-06-05, 12:05 PM   #20
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meh, personally i enjoyed R's better....but cali had some nice personals at the end....but the rest of his verse i didn't like, mainly because it was a little basic, i thought anyways...i'll break it down...

-Dude is all mouth got k.oed by the last dude he called out
Left r.v for the fall?...of course all birds get called south!!
-didn't connect at all...didn't like the punch either 4/10
-No flow little homo only audio win is a no show
Ya punches is so so still undevolped like cell phone photos!!
-meh, kinda okay, still real basic/dumb 5/10
-No respect only beat 4 vets i checked ya stats(1)
Nobody likes you!!...you getno replies on ya audio tracks!!
-once again, real basic here, but decent 5/10
-Your only chance to 'Elevate' is when you move in a month(2)
Yeah we know you 'Restricked'.....from throwing a dope punch!!(3)
haha, second line was hot, first was okay 7/10
-Good name lame cuz yous a groupie 'laytext' wrap over a penis
He got a gallon of wackness.......annd only a 'Drop of Genius'!(4)
-pretty horrible wording....nice meta on the second 7/10

total: 28/50overall, this wasnt your best drop man, lot of it was too plain, nothing really that creative until you hit your last 2 bars, but i think it was too late to recover

-Your Wack Kid....You Can't Handle The Shit That I'm Spittin..
Man..Your Reign Of RV Wasn't Short..Dude It Was Non-Existent..
-not bad...set up was poor 5/10
-Whats Funny Is..In Audio I've Heard Your Skill Compared To L.I..
A Top Vet?..Nah..Even DeadlyVision Said Your A Disgrace To A.I..
bah... i dunno if first line is true, but fire on the second line 6/10
-Look Faggot You Can't See Me..Like Bats Looking At Red Signs..
And By Battling You...Rated Will Be Sure To Meet Dead Lines..
meh, 5/10
-You Were Born?! What Happen?...Dennis The Mennis Fuck Shamoo?
You Claim To Be God..and God Loves Ugly..So Then Out Came You..
haha, i laughed at this punch, nice personal 7/10
-Listen To Everyone..Your Wack..Man Let That Shit Get Through..
Since You Like Arrows...Lets Put It This Way...I'm > Than U..
nice closer to finish it off 6/10

total: 29/50....not the best from you either....some punches could have been set up alot better, but overall, i laughed at your verse more, it was more consistent with complexity and creativity, so thats why im giving you the vote, close battle though, keep up to both

v/Lay-Text
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