he rhymed time with time, wow.....................

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upppppppppppinnnnnnnnn for none DR votes............

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qoute (he rhymed time with time, wow....................)

are you trynna be a hater

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This guy duabs aint 2-0,he just reset his record/
ima enjoy this win over u like trojans,its just my pleasure/
eh.............no
this dick won a few battles,so now he wanna get little cocky/
so ima run steps up this niggas face,like rocky/
no.............
and i got heat that'll take your, sleeves off like summer time/
and you the type of nigga that wish he could flow some of time/
no, no flow...........
only burner you saw,was on the top of your stove/
dont post just dissapear like,a magic show/
no...........

Push this bitch aside, like a plough through thick snow..
Post a verse when its accepted??
Then that decision you selected wasnt the best...as you lost by a no-show!!
nice personal..........
When you called me out, i didn't set a battle, i set-a-war...
We know you want to be something else....hence the metaphor!!
ok...........
I must be clever like a statition or even a mathmatician see..
Because il turn your battle numbers...into multiples of three!!
eh............

metaphor, wasn't really feeling the flow, and the punches were too soft....
daubs, good personal, ok flow.......






RTF

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Votin for Daubs

Daubs gets this due to a more creative verse and hard punches

Duabs-
Punches-= creative n hard hittin
personals- hard hittin and strait tot he point i liked your personals laot fam

structure- nice and easy to keep with
Multies- didnt see any
wordplay- was tight
flow- was on the dot nice flow

Meta
punches- a lil soft n a lil basic elevate on them
personals- didnt see any throw some in ya nextr battle elevate on them as well
flow- ight flow good flow
strucutre- nice n descent
multies- didnt see any fam
wordplay- a lil basic

ight meta elevate on personals and harder punches
daubs elevate one multies

vote goes to duabs i enjoyed his punches n personals more then meta's

good battle fams

BE SURE TO RTF
Battle link below my sig

holla

uppin.............................................

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VOTE : Dabus



Push this bitch aside, like a plough through thick snow..
Post a verse when its accepted??
Then that decision you selected wasnt the best...as you lost by a no-show!!
ok opener, a waste of a line/two in ur set -up, hits hard tho -7.5/10
When you called me out, i didn't set a battle, i set-a-war...
We know you want to be something else....hence the metaphor!!
Dopeness bredrin, nice set-up , flowed well, dope personal n wordplay on the name - 9/10
I must be clever like a statition or even a mathmatician see..
Because il turn your battle numbers...into multiples of three!!
nice and creative, sort of a personal, dcent closer - 8/10



This guy duabs aint 2-0,he just reset his record/
ima enjoy this win over u like trojans,its just my pleasure/
u got a personal COMMENt but theres no diss..-6/10.
this dick won a few battles,so now he wanna get little cocky/
so ima run steps up this niggas face,like rocky/
rocky punches r played n this was not hard hittin -6/10
and i got heat that'll take your, sleeves off like summer time/
and you the type of nigga that wish he could flow some of time/
dissed him this bar..a bit more..acts as a filler no real hard httin content, also flow is off - 6.5/10
only burner you saw,was on the top of your stove/
dont post just dissapear like,a magic show/
best bar of drop, better flow, nuttin original, hard hittin tho - 7.5/10

Daubs - work on structure
Metaphor - work on dissin and creativeness

RTF link in sig....Mad Dog v Acuity

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my vote = dau

punches=dau
structure=dau
creativity=dau
mettas=dau
enjoyment=dau

yea man no hate metta but he beat u by a mile. None of ya punches really made any sense so I wasn't really feeling it. You need to elevate alot more man. Overall nice verse daubs just improve on ya structure a lil bite ite. peace

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This guy duabs aint 2-0,he just reset his record/
ima enjoy this win over u like trojans,its just my pleasure/
this was an aight bar think it wouldve been better if you wouldve worded it differently.

this dick won a few battles,so now he wanna get little cocky/
so ima run steps up this niggas face,like rocky/
the dick and cocky shit was wack the rocky part was good. but it didnt really go nowhere when u talkin bout runnin up someones face

and i got heat that'll take your, sleeves off like summer time/
and you the type of nigga that wish he could flow some of time/
Gun talk is worthless on the net unless its in an open mic or Song. and the second line was wack.

only burner you saw,was on the top of your stove/
dont post just dissapear like,a magic show/
no comment

Push this bitch aside, like a plough through thick snow..
Post a verse when its accepted??
Then that decision you selected wasnt the best...as you lost by a no-show!!
last line was kinda stretched but an aight personal

When you called me out, i didn't set a battle, i set-a-war...
We know you want to be something else....hence the metaphor!!
line is aight. good use of the definition of metaphor but did really hit as hard as it could wit better wording.

I must be clever like a statition or even a mathmatician see..
Because il turn your battle numbers...into multiples of three!!
Won the battle for u right here. loved the last line. i knew where u was goin wit it and i was goin to check his battle stats until i saw u left an explanation for it.

it was a mediorcre battle but Daubs won it because of his closer.

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