upp'in this battle yet again and again and again..

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Voted For: DA RIPPA

rippa gets a win for this one, i cant really folllow the other...maybe my brain just doesnt work right..

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confidential:
yo imma put da beat'in on him like an abusive freak
check, u couldnt have a straight line writting ya verse from a barber seat
^^^^DA SECOND LINE WAS KIND OF CREATIVE...BUT IT WAS WORDED HORRIBLE...
ya skills..WAS HOT, now they not..dont fight it
cause bein on this internet shit for too long it looks like u caught the virus
^^^^^WACK AS FUKK....AND IT WAS 2 LONG
Now u'll get bash N stab in a flash just 2 crash G's, a win u'll grasp
da rippa?, hey give him a hand, cause where his used to be, now there's only a gash
^^^WHUT????????
Then I up n pop at G, and I don't mean a smart remark from Uncle Phil or Ant Viv
No amount of WILL will help, even jackson would say he wouldnt LICK-SHOT on this kid *get it*
^^^MICHEAL JACKSON LINES R PLAYED AS FUKK FAM
N this bitch i blame, cuz off a FREE why was ya weak "blows" are "brought-up"
wanna try and scram on me .. im like tyson best 2 believe i'll fuck this borad-up
^^DECENT....
so hold up...
ya punches aint popp'in me, plus u cant be stoppin me, u ObSoLeTe
only way yall can win is if u bite me, so u better of trying to make copies of my teeth
^^^NO...VERY WEAK CLOSER


rippa:
*look like a hot dog stuck in a tub of potted meat*
*with chewed up tobbaca for hair and loofs of brerad for feet*
^^^LOL WHUT...
*it a shame how my flow make ya ass stagger*
*damn you a young buck why tha hell are you taking viagra*
^^^^WACK.....
*i'll put bullets through your body like rocks going through soup*
*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*
^^^^KIND OF FUNNY...BUT DIS A PLAYED JOKE
*now that my nig is a got-damn shame*
*after i beat you i outto take your name*
^^^^NAH
*this shoud be blow out.........if you don't choke*
*but you won't....you use to having shit shove down your throat*
^^^LOL...WACK
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i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*
^^^LMAOOOOOO...
*the way i just ass raped you on this is pittiful*
*but bitch don''t worry i'll keep it confidential*
^^^DECENT...CLOSER....U HAD DA ONLY PERSONAL OF DA BATTLE


V/DA RIPPA....4 HAVIN A PERSONAL AND 4 HAVIN A NEAT STRUCTURE AND NOT STRETCHIN HIS BARS.....

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: DA RIPPA

aight da rippa took dis

da rippa-hiz verse was all ova da plave like cons he had sum punches dey wasnt hot tho but he did have sum he also had sum personals bout hiz name dont space out ya bars like dat cuz u have 2 keep dem all as 1 big as paragraph but go 2 da next line afta each closin bar

confidential-dat shit was tired man period u aint have no punches dat caught mah eye just a bunch of facts n ya verse have sum punches n ya verse 2 make it hot also have sum personals and dont stretch ya bars out like i told da rippa

vote- da rippa

uppin for vote let me hear it

Voted For: DA RIPPA

Man this Battle Was Alright Both Verses Were Coo! but my vote goes to
Vote:Confidential
Wordplay)6/10>Da Rippa
Rhyme Scheme)6.5>Confidential
Punches)7/10>Confidential
Da Rippa had Some Punches but were really played out for example:*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*<<Used That Back Inda Day! no Hate But im just bein Real With Ya!Well Holla Atcha Boy N Herez Da Link To ma Battle:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190886
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190886

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Voted For: confidential

V/confidential.....this was an ight battle con gets my vote cause he came wit harder punchs an they were consistent an creative but u need to work on your structure.....Da Rippa...u need to work on ur punchs u need to Set them up better instead of puttin Fillers an u were to creative wit them it felt like u came to weak.....NO hate........
RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=C
Closer=C
Structure=C
Punchs=C
Vocab=C
Multi's=Tie (not many)
Personals=D
Wordplay=Tie
Overall=Confidential

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Upp'in This Battle.......

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Voted For: confidential

Con-Errrr you need to work on your structure, some of your punches was played out, but MOSTLY of them were effective. The flow was off man. Nice wordplays keep doing that, add more personals in your verse.

Da rippa- Errrr ok verse. Punches were played, some of them were weak, you had 1 good bar of punch, but blah. The flow wa blah, stop paceing your bars man. Um what else? You need to work on punches.


Overall=This battle is one-sided because Con came harder with punches and wordplays. Da rippa you had an "ok" verse but your punches wasn't as hard as con's, so my vote goes to con.

Return a fav con, links in sig.