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Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

-Stu-
Don't test me man, forreal my tech will rip him
And "Evil will Be Gone" like an exorcism
^^^^ 7/10 pretty good opener..decent hit

Your text is quite wack kid, but I like practice
Evil will never go big.................................
.............He "sticks to the net" like "arachnids"
^^^^ 7/10 not sure why the pause is so big...ok wordplay...ok hit

You readily strapped? Bring the heat, I don't stress wit a gat
Your verses "pull as many punches" as a "wrestlin match"
^^^^ 7/10 ok wordplay...ok hit..kinda played 2nd line

This kid is a menace, so Evil endin' up winnin
"wont happen" like the "Chicago Cubs winnin' the pennant" *
^^^^ 8/10 your best line...decent personal...still lacked a hard punch...ok closer

29/40 = %73


-evil-
im going easy on this victim just cuase he new to the game
he’s not dope he’s wack, just like his fucking noob name
^^^^ 7/10 decent opener...good hit

my verse gonna make you not see so its like looking in mist
how is this fag phantom gonna battle me when he don’t exist
^^^^ 6/10 not much of a hit...this bar could of been word'ed better

………………I know im gonna beat this herb its just a fact
……………Like phantom of the opera he just a fucking act
^^^^ 7/10 dont use "herb" in anymore battles unless you can make is HOT...decent hit...ok closer

20/30 = %66


Vote: Stu




*no hate...just honest opinion*

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Thanx man...Uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!

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Uppin Thru The Fucking Roof...

Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

dayum stu that shit was murderous. you had good wordplay. in that one. I was feelin that too def. structure was not too good. flow was dope. your vocab was dope. and good personals. shit was hot. oerall 7.5/10

evil:
you had ok punches but thatsd about it. everything else was just fillers and broing. you'll get there fam dont worry. you had good structure.. ok flow....no personals.....vocab was blah... overall 6/10

vote: stu

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Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

-This is an LFS Review-

Let's begin....

Flowin Phantom

Don't test me man, forreal my tech will rip him
And "Evil will Be Gone" like an exorcism

Decent....

Your text is quite wack kid, but I like practice
Evil will never go big.................................
.............He "sticks to the net" like "arachnids"

I'm assuming this goes together...if it does...not that good...

You readily strapped? Bring the heat, I don't stress wit a gat
Your verses "pull as many punches" as a "wrestlin match"

Nice...

This kid is a menace, so Evil endin' up winnin
"wont happen" like the "Chicago Cubs winnin' the pennant"

Clever...

Let's move on to the other verse

evil

IP:


im going easy on this victim just cuase he new to the game
he’s not dope he’s wack, just like his fucking noob name

Dont get it

my verse gonna make you not see so its like looking in mist
how is this fag phantom gonna battle me when he don’t exist

Umm not that good

………………I know im gonna beat this herb its just a fact
……………Like phantom of the opera he just a fucking act

[b]Pretty good...cept for the dots lol

Overall: I give this to Flowin cuz he wrote more so he had more to even out his verse....evil u had to come HARD foronly 6 lines....and you didnt...i wanted more....this was a decent battle...RTF OR I WILL NEVER VOTE OR LEAVE FEED FOR YOU AGAIN!!!!

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