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smokey817 | 1 | 16.67% | |
Da UFC | 5 | 83.33% | |
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05-17-05, 03:15 PM | #16 | |
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 2029 97B3
Voted For: Da UFC
LoL Nice vote>>UFC wordplay>5.5/10 scheme>6/10 punches>7/10 Mr.Smoky wordplay>3/10 scheme>??/10 punches>0.10
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05-17-05, 06:40 PM | #17 | |
Sam Dope
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This was feedback posted for smokey817
IP: AD23 BDD5
weak battle...Checking polls..........
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05-17-05, 06:48 PM | #18 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Da UFC
Aii This Battle wasnt All dat lemme show you You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site 1st Line ..>Sucked ...second line made me laugh Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot 1st Line....>sucked Second line was Aii Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit Ok Verse in Total Your first lines werent all dat good you need to work on having your 1st line lead into your second line which is your pucn which will make You pucnh much stronger Smokey817 ..................> Wack <...................... And DonT take it to offense when I say Give up Your Rap Life |
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05-17-05, 08:28 PM | #19 | |
Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
Voted For: Da UFC
-Da UFC- You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site ^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good opener, 1st line was a little weak Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot ^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good wordplay, just not hard enough Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit ^^^^ 6/10 1st line is a self glory setup, wasnt feeling the hit, not a good closer 22/30 = %73 -smokey817- smokey i can't vote using a percentage cause i cant find ya bars or lines...what i can say nothing rhymes, a lot of self glory, hits weren't hard, structure was bad...sorry no hate, just honest opinion Vote: Da UFC
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05-17-05, 08:42 PM | #20 |
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IP: D322 4956
thankz fo da votez homiez!
i appreciate dat shit fo real!!!!!!!! |
05-18-05, 12:25 PM | #21 |
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IP: 2B71 3815
Voted For: smokey817
didnt really like either of these verses. but, this one seemed better to me. |
05-18-05, 02:43 PM | #22 |
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IP: A713 E6BC
roflz, dis dude aint know what hes talkin about fo real
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