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05-15-05, 07:05 PM
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Succès Facile!
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you got that eminem style goin...I like the way You broke down tha relationship!
I gotta say that was great...really...that mustve took alotta thought an emotion ta put ur heart out there like that. best line that I felt"Reconsidering my thoughts, actually it was more than a few, Wish i had known the result of an attempted abortion, Before spendin a fortune tryna believe i'm important to you, Behind those innocent lines is a criminal mind and, I was blinded cause I've never seen someone as gorgeous as you" ^^^I've been threw it..an regret that!^^^ keep goin with the real!! |
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05-15-05, 08:20 PM
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Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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9/10...simply ur best...need i really explain myself fam?...real talk
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05-15-05, 08:49 PM
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in your system
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la la la....verse being processed....
shit man, you got emotion coming outta the wazoo....its kinda hard to flow to without the beat, but it doesn't matter that much..just cant be stubborn about shit, cause it was a unique style that was enjoyable to read......like i said, loved the emotion, really stood out in this piece, imagery was good, not as much because this was an emotional piece, so it didn't really matter.......good use of vocab, shit man....this was dope, really expressed yourself nicely, easily understandable and definately relatable......good piece my homie yeah, you should go check out my poems....beach.......word, keep up.........and if you still wanna do that one collab or whatever, i totally forgot about it, and what to write about and stuff, haha,a word
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
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05-17-05, 12:52 AM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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bah bah bah bah barndoor
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05-17-05, 05:14 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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uppin..........
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88 miles per hour should do it. |
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05-19-05, 05:08 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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uppin...............
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05-23-05, 10:33 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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uppin..........
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88 miles per hour should do it. |
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