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Ax Dogg 5 62.50%
Babble.On 3 37.50%
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Old 05-16-05, 07:52 PM   #1
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fix ur structure. too much to be tryna read................
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Old 05-16-05, 08:12 PM   #2
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^ Lol, everyone on this site uses short ass bars, it's hard to get used to.
 
Old 05-16-05, 08:51 PM   #3
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Voted For: Babble.On

Babble On...u have a ok verse...u lost me in ya flow sumtime but i found myself again...u had sum ok punches,nuthin to brag about....structure is horrible which prolly messed up my reading.

Ax Dog-Ur verse was pretty basic and need lots of work...creare sum punches and come wit better personals...u got the potensial it just seem like u really dont try ta make people say "Damn!"...

punches-Babble On
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Opener-Babble On
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Old 05-16-05, 08:55 PM   #4
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Good Looks Folks


Uppin this for some more Votes
 
Old 05-17-05, 08:13 AM   #5
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Wow...... none of those should have been inadequate feedback....even the vote against me lol.


Oh well, uppin.
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Old 05-17-05, 04:09 PM   #6
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Uppin

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Old 05-17-05, 04:13 PM   #7
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This was feedback posted for Babble.On

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Just checking...................................I'm lazy so i dont feel like voting.
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Old 05-17-05, 04:23 PM   #8
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wtf happened?................. why it all came back to 0, that's not fair
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Old 05-18-05, 04:44 PM   #9
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^ The votes were DQ'd because apparently they weren't explained.

Damnit, uppin for more votes.
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Old 05-18-05, 05:33 PM   #10
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lmfao@my shizzle being disqualified........lame...
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Old 05-18-05, 10:01 PM   #11
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Uppin this shit one more god-fucking damn time you cocksuckers
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Old 05-19-05, 08:11 AM   #12
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Uppin again....vote on my god damn battle morons..
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Old 05-19-05, 01:40 PM   #13
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Voted For: Babble.On

Babble.On - this was a close battle...but you had better punchlines and flow... your structue was good.. but keep working hard cuz you will be good. 8/10

Ax Dogg - again this WAS A CLOSE BATTLE.. but Babble.On had better punches and flow.. your flow was iight and your punches was iiight too.but keep working hard cuz you will be good. 7.5/10

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Old 05-19-05, 02:02 PM   #14
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at least an honest vote........ lol
............................uppin................. ......
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Old 05-20-05, 12:13 AM   #15
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Thanks for voting, uppin for some more votes......
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