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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Murdz 5 100.00%
Yvonne 0 0%
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Old 05-21-05, 11:47 AM   #16
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Murdz


yvonne:
I neva had intensions of eatin but i just hadda come 2 dinner
ima tear u apart like chicken and check me pick u wit a finger
^^^VERY WEAK OPENER
i once knocked off ur knukkle and i c u back in deciet
you fuckin in the wrong battle BITCH,too bad u cant s'it
^^^WHUT??????
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
cos babies break thru ur ego and make u re-arrange ur shit
^^^^WHUT DA FUKK DO U MEAN IN DA SECOND LINE
his punches r like jelly that y i got him plastered like nelly
if u really hate licking candy tell me wdf u doin on ur dogs belly
^^^^LOL.....SUPER WACK....YA VERSE WAS HORRIBLE MAH...NO HATE I MEAN REAL TALK

murdz:
yvonne, aka shemale, she, he... what gender are you,really, does anyone know?
How do you go from a general in the army to some childish femcee-wannabe ho?~*
^^^^UHH OKAY PERSONAL
you resemble a flower- you're under the same classification as "herbs"
yvonne's like a table menu- she goes to fold and disappear when she gets served~
^^^NICE...PUNCHLINE
bitch you fake... you play with more pussies then animal adoption shelters
I'll make you dissolve in my spit like you consist of Alka Seltzer~
^^^^DECENT BAR
You can be Alicia Silverstone- I'll make you leave this set totally "Clueless"
the truth is You couldn't come hard even if you ejaculated frozen vaginal fluids~
^^^IM TIRED OF DA CUM HARD LINES..4REAL DA FLOW WAS GOOD HERE THO

V/MURDZ.........

RETURN DA FUKKIN FAVOR MURDZ N STOP BEIN A LAZY FUCKER...
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Old 05-23-05, 04:55 AM   #17
BiZzO
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Old 05-23-05, 07:23 AM   #18
13th.
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Voted For: Murdz

I neva had intensions of eatin but i just hadda come 2 dinner
ima tear u apart like chicken and check me pick u wit a finger
NAH
i once knocked off ur knukkle and i c u back in deciet
you fuckin in the wrong battle BITCH,too bad u cant s'it
SO-SO
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
cos babies break thru ur ego and make u re-arrange ur shit
GOOD
his punches r like jelly that y i got him plastered like nelly
if u really hate licking candy tell me wdf u doin on ur dogs belly
LOL
=5/10 SORRI BUT THERE WAS NO REAL PUNCHES IN DAT VERSE.........

VS

yvonne, aka shemale, she, he... what gender are you,really, does anyone know?
How do you go from a general in the army to some childish femcee-wannabe ho?~*
GOOD
you resemble a flower- you're under the same classification as "herbs"
yvonne's like a table menu- she goes to fold and disappear when she gets served~
NICE
bitch you fake... you play with more pussies then animal adoption shelters
I'll make you dissolve in my spit like you consist of Alka Seltzer~
OK
You can be Alicia Silverstone- I'll make you leave this set totally "Clueless"
the truth is You couldn't come hard even if you ejaculated frozen vaginal fluids~
LOL
=8/10 A REAL NICE VERSE WI SOME REALI TITE PUNCHES!!!!!!

v/MURDZ FOR COMIN A LOT LOT HARDER!!!!!!
 
Old 05-23-05, 12:05 PM   #19
.Poetic.
I'm a closet fag.
 
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From: Colorado
IP: 4A0A BEB6

Voted For: Murdz

Yvonne...
I neva had intensions of eatin but i just hadda come 2 dinner
ima tear u apart like chicken and check me pick u wit a finger
Nah...4/10
i once knocked off ur knukkle and i c u back in deciet
you fuckin in the wrong battle BITCH,too bad u cant s'it
Forced....3/10
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
cos babies break thru ur ego and make u re-arrange ur shit
Nope...4/10
his punches r like jelly that y i got him plastered like nelly
if u really hate licking candy tell me wdf u doin on ur dogs belly
No...2/10

Overall: 13/40


Murdz...
yvonne, aka shemale, she, he... what gender are you,really, does anyone know?
How do you go from a general in the army to some childish femcee-wannabe ho?~*
Haha...5/10
you resemble a flower- you're under the same classification as "herbs"
yvonne's like a table menu- she goes to fold and disappear when she gets served~
Nice...6/10
bitch you fake... you play with more pussies then animal adoption shelters
I'll make you dissolve in my spit like you consist of Alka Seltzer~
Word...6/10
You can be Alicia Silverstone- I'll make you leave this set totally "Clueless"
the truth is You couldn't come hard even if you ejaculated frozen vaginal fluids~
Hahaha...7/10

Overall: 24/40

Vote: Murdz

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Old 05-24-05, 12:36 AM   #20
BiZzO
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thanks yo......... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 05-24-05, 07:18 AM   #21
MyNamesGrafhYall
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From: In A Guttah
This was feedback posted for Murdz

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Hey I Cant Vote Bcuz Of Da Post Count But Murdz Yo Flow Wuz Tite
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Old 05-25-05, 01:45 AM   #22
BiZzO
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Old 05-25-05, 05:13 AM   #23
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: Murdz

This was an okay battle but ima give this one to Murdz

Quote:
Originally Posted by Yvonne
I neva had intensions of eatin but i just hadda come 2 dinner
ima tear u apart like chicken and check me pick u wit a finger
i once knocked off ur knukkle and i c u back in deciet
you fuckin in the wrong battle BITCH,too bad u cant s'it
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
cos babies break thru ur ego and make u re-arrange ur shit
his punches r like jelly that y i got him plastered like nelly
if u really hate licking candy tell me wdf u doin on ur dogs belly

Ehh...this was an okay verse... it could have been alot better... try to use better consitant punchlines,...maybe couple of meta's and try to do name plays.. overall keep it up..if you came harder you would have won this battle

Quote:
Originally Posted by Murdz
yvonne, aka shemale, she, he... what gender are you,really, does anyone know?
How do you go from a general in the army to some childish femcee-wannabe ho?~*
you resemble a flower- you're under the same classification as "herbs"
yvonne's like a table menu- she goes to fold and disappear when she gets served~
bitch you fake... you play with more pussies then animal adoption shelters
I'll make you dissolve in my spit like you consist of Alka Seltzer~
You can be Alicia Silverstone- I'll make you leave this set totally "Clueless"
the truth is You couldn't come hard even if you ejaculated frozen vaginal fluids~

Pretty nice drop...some nice punchlines they were consistant some hit hard , some were alittle bit of a filller...structure was okay , alittle off...felt you could have used personals it would have helped alot

But overall vote -Murdz keep it up both
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