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View Poll Results: iLLuNaTiKz Vs Livin' Legendz
Eyetalik 5 100.00%
Murdz 0 0%
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Old 05-23-05, 05:29 AM   #16
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thanks yo.......... upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 05-24-05, 05:40 PM   #17
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Old 05-25-05, 04:38 AM   #18
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Fucking Hell Man Fuckin Vote On This Ish Damnit Fuckin Pathetic
 
Old 05-25-05, 06:56 PM   #19
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Voted For: Eyetalik

Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb
Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard
—decent opener
And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living...
Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given
—wack
Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid
You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated
—pretty good
I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC
You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries
—eh, not feeling this one
You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs
Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz*
—kinda decent here
Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA
Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack'
—using the last word as HA? Tf.. an okay punch
He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York
Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'*
—kinda nice here
His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son
I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One
—nope


You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat
I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat
—nope
So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat
Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak
—wack, but decent multies though
Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain
Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain
—okay
Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein
Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain
—decent multies, weak punch
Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win
u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin
—decent
I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin
Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin'
—decent again

overall – both drops were weak here, but Eyetalilk took this one,
just had harder punches (by a lil bit), structure was decent.. (don’t
center ur structures though), and he had a decent wordplay up in
there, but the punches could’ve been harder though, just saying
and Murdz, work on ur punches though, ur multies were decent in
here, but the punches need some work though, & both.. add some
more personas in there though..
..no hate
RTF Eyetalik.. Or This Vote Gets Removed!!

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Old 05-26-05, 06:52 PM   #20
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Old 05-26-05, 07:37 PM   #21
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This is pathetic. Murdz really did have tha better verse.
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Old 05-26-05, 11:45 PM   #22
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Old 05-27-05, 01:03 AM   #23
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Voted For: Eyetalik

This was a pretty tight battle but to me i think Anamosity took this one...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Murdz


You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat
I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat
So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat
Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak°
Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain°°
Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain
Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein°°°
Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain
Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win°°°°
u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin°°°°°
I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin°°°°°°
Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin'

Pretty tight verse,, but it could have been alot better... structure was good, punchlines were there some were hitten hard some were just fillers... personals were Ehh cus your personals really didnt have anything to do with Anamosity..Overall nice drop..if you had came alittle harder you would have won ..

Quote:
Originally Posted by Anamosity

Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb
Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard
And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living...
Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given
Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid
You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated
I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC
You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries
You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs
Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz*
Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA
Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack'
He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York
Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'*
His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son
I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One

Nice drop homie , i was feeling it nice structure it was on point, nice flow... it was good , punchlines were hitten hard , some were okay, personals were okay they were pretty good, Overall nice drop fam , you won this battle in my point of view , keep it up

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Old 05-27-05, 04:24 AM   #24
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man fuck this... this bullshit... he gettin riden cause of his structe thats all it is... and how does diagnosis say its a tight battle and that idiot skriptz say its wack it dont make fuckin sence....
 
Old 05-27-05, 07:18 PM   #25
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Old 05-27-05, 09:34 PM   #26
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Old 05-27-05, 09:37 PM   #27
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...dont get mad Murdz...just voting...not unless

you want to settle it in the arenas...
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Old 05-27-05, 11:22 PM   #28
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Voted For: Eyetalik

Anamosity- great verse, you came with great structure, great metaz. Your opener was only 'eh', but everything afta was dope, from tha 2nd bar to tha 7th it was hot, only 1 played idea, and that was the elevate and foodcourt line....but even that wasnt too bad....8.75/10


murdz-ur verse was ok, i felt like you were trying to use elevated vocab to somewhat make ur verse. so throughout the whole verse it seemed like u were struggling to come up with bars. u need to just let that shit flow man. 7/10
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Old 05-28-05, 07:30 AM   #29
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Voted For: Eyetalik

Yo Here it is check it
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Murdz--You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat
I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat
So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat
Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak°<<<<Nice multies but pretty weak 1 1/2 bar punch
Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain°°
Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain
Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein°°°
Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain<<<<<again Nice Multies but punch didnt really hit
Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win°°°°
u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin°°°°°<<<<weak Multies and Sorry punch
I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin°°°°°°
Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin'<<<<<kinda lost me on that whats the rhymin word????...but in any case weak punch aight Multies...
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Wall Street---Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb
Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard<<<<Tight punch here
And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living...
Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given<<<<good punch here also
Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid
You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated<<<<RREEEALL nice Punch here
I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC
You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries<<<great punch here
You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs
Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz*<<<<another great punch
Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA
Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack'<<<<,great Multies good punch
He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York
Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'*<<<pretty basic but stil a good punch
His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son
I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One<<<<<Nice closer nice multies nice punch
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Murds i feel that you are relying to much on Multies chill out wit them try to hit some punches up....Not bad structure but still work on that.....that last line was too long u couldent understand it.....but any way .....nice drop...
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Wall Street---no real advise for you other then work on them multies...
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Ok Punches almost alwase win and this is one of those times.....i felt like Murdz didnt hit him with near enough of them, nice multies but punches win battles so there fore i gotta go with Street.....and i expect this to be a preety one sided affair...Peayce
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