Voted For: RobKilla


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Voted For: pictureperfect2

oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
6...LoL!! nice concept and good punch here, nice opener.
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
7...wordplay was nice, at first i thought you was calling him talented, but then i read again, nice punch.
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
5...not feelin this line.....rhymin is off a touch.
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
6...decent punch, a good concept with the 9 to 5 shit.
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
5...not feelin this, talkin about you getting BJ's was kinda gay.

OVERALL: 29/50


u silly boy...
ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
5...ok personal....not really feelin the setup to the punch though, it was kinda weak.
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
4...this was gay, that whole pussy concept was really wack and childish.
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
5...too basic to be real hard hitting.
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
5...ok concept, not really used as an affective punch.
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
6...finally a decent punch, i was feelin the 2nd line on this, first was kinda wack.

OVERALL: 25/50


ok drops from both....
picture came more consistent...
had some good concepts for punches and used them well, flowed nicely, personals were on point, some ok wordplay in there but still cud be a little better....
rob was consistent, not hard hittin with the punches though, had that nice closer, but mostly you were either too basic or just no real punch in ya bars.....

V/ - pictureperfect2

RTF!!! on the marv, stanza, or daubs battle.....links in my sig..

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'

DECENT ENOUGH OPENER

avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up

NICE PERSONAL, WAS FEELIN IT

u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it

NOPE, NICE FLOW IN SET UP, BAD PUNCH.

so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?

HAHAHA NICE ONE...

im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past

YEAH, PLAYED CONCEPT BUT STILL HIT.

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ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does

OK OPENER, NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH.

U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"

NICE WORD/NAME PLAY,M GOOD PUNCH.

but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness

NOPE, BAD CONCEPT AND PUNCH.

God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins

YEAH OK....

girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?

MEH, OK CLOSER I GUESS.

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OVERALL PP2 GETS MAH VOTE FOR STAYING MORE CONSISTANT WITH PUNCHES AND BETTER PERSONALS.
ROB YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT BUT THE ONLY DOPE PERSONAL/PUNCH WAS THE PURFECT LINE.

NO HATE

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

RobKilla - nice verse..good personal with the opener..i like the wordplay with the puurfect line..very creative..u had good punches in ur verse..everything flowed well and ur structure was cool.....7/10




pictureperfect - u had a nice verse as well..ur opener was very creative..that line killed him..the next bar was a very good personal..i liked how used that against him..ur closer was a bit weak though..but i think u won, only by a point.....8/10




pictureperfect wins!!!!!

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
^^ok, but i wasnt feeling the person, didnt connect
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
^^seen this in cyphers/tc/wack.....
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
^^weak, stretched bad ..
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
^^decent, didnt connect well thou
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
^^decent, but it didnt connect well.
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overall your verse was consistent but lacked proper wording
n hard hitting punches towards your opponent, a played concept was the purfect line/pussy..blah, it wasnt great anyhow...closer was ok, nothin special in this verse to be honest homie...
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oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
^^decent, feeling the concept
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
^^ok, not feelin it much thou
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
^^forced ryhme scheme...ok, punch
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
^^lol,...this had releventcy to me considering ive seen that line"purfect"b4
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
^^ok, but setup n punch were irrelevant to each other
keep the concept similar for your punches......
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overall i was feeling a couple bars more then robkillas
this battle can honestly go either way cuz you both came
equally as good/bad....some stuff was plain boarderline wack
but some was a good personal...both need wordplay n better nameplays..

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

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