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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Celerity 0 0%
Dizzee Rascal 5 100.00%
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Old 06-03-05, 09:48 AM   #16
Dizzee Rascal
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Man thats 4 votes for me may i add non are dr since im new to the site u silly turnip
And ur attempt at swaying, its obvious i killed u? damn man ur not that nice serious
Lets up this then and please dont claim for them to be removed because that would be the ultimate bitch move, sorry if it may endup with me giving u first los, if i win that is, but man thats life man up
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Old 06-04-05, 04:00 PM   #17
Ryan Hughes
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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

wreck with text? nah, you just a wreck with text
I'll have you 'scrambling for your life' like imprisoned breakfast chefs
^^^ight ...Nothin special
start re-thinking your timing, I laugh at your thoughts of besting me
when I ran over your brain I must’ve jogged your memory
^^^that was ight...played heard it before...
i'll shred till I slice through... pound till your rotten
pound till your chest is caved in as deep as Bin Laden
^^^^No....bin laden lines played....
tearing through... I hate your guts, I got them on my stitching
so I'll give you a dirty look like unqualified cosmeticians
^^^Good....
watch me pin him, then pin my ribbon... just bow and take the L
the loss gots you kicking yourself like you tore your ACL
^^^Ight not bad closer....
Cel u had an ight verse no personals punchs not to creative....good structure....but u werent consistent trought out....

Tired of fucking ho's, ya wackness shows, that your whole careers is fable
So, Naming ya clothes, is the only time celerity able to sign a label
^^^Good opener....
ya seem strange cus, like physcho porn stars i maime pus
Quick to aim cus? Disect this herb with a B/bee still wouldn't be famous..
^^^ight not bad...
Too slick for ya fate ho, Hit ur face wiv the str8 atleast ur revival hood splits
Prick ill str8 blow up your temple like suicidal buddhists
^^^Good,this one was nice
Hope ya dont choke, embarrassed so much go ahead try and gloat
Ima showboat, throwing Cell 'of verse' how i break this choir boys throat
^^^^Ight solid line..
Prove verbal abuse, decapitate any bystanders to crews aint for you
End this feud, the way i contain cell voters yelling "CELL-U-LOSE/CELLULOSE"*
^^^Good closer....
Dizzee u came wit a stronger verse better punchs some personals...little stretched but u made up for it....u get my vote for stronger punchs.....
.....RETURN THE FAOVR..(or never receive an honest vote from me agian)V/Dizzee Rascal
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Old 06-04-05, 04:06 PM   #18
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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

ok this was a tight battle both had punches that were packin though cele had the better punches but none were personals so dizze got it and then the flow was both for yall and the lines were both equally in overall the battle was equally but my
v/ goes to dizee cuz it seemed that his punches were personal while celerity didnt even mention his name but both were good my vote goes to dizzee

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Old 06-05-05, 07:25 AM   #19
Dizzee Rascal
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Lets up this people...............................
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Old 06-05-05, 09:28 AM   #20
K-Trini
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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Tired of fucking ho's, ya wackness shows, that your whole careers is fable
So, Naming ya clothes, is the only time celerity able to sign a label
^^weak opener
ya seem strange cus, like physcho porn stars i maime pus
Quick to aim cus? Disect this herb with a B/bee still wouldn't be famous..
^^still weak
Too slick for ya fate ho, Hit ur face wiv the str8 atleast ur revival hood splits
Prick ill str8 blow up your temple like suicidal buddhists
^^^decent
Hope ya dont choke, embarrassed so much go ahead try and gloat
Ima showboat, throwing Cell 'of verse' how i break this choir boys throat
^^OK
Prove verbal abuse, decapitate any bystanders to crews aint for you
End this feud, the way i contain cell voters yelling "CELL-U-LOSE/CELLULOSE
^^best line,beautiful wordplay

Conclusion-Ur starting of the verse was weak.But it just got better and better as it went on.That last line was one of the best I've seen.Nice verse.


wreck with text? nah, you just a wreck with text
I'll have you 'scrambling for your life' like imprisoned breakfast chefs
^^decent
start re-thinking your timing, I laugh at your thoughts of besting me
when I ran over your brain I must’ve jogged your memory
^^nah,played
i'll shred till I slice through... pound till your rotten
pound till your chest is caved in as deep as Bin Laden
^^again...played
tearing through... I hate your guts, I got them on my stitching
so I'll give you a dirty look like unqualified cosmeticians
^^decent
watch me pin him, then pin my ribbon... just bow and take the L
the loss gots you kicking yourself like you tore your ACL
^^simple

Vote-Some ur punchlines were adequate...but not anything st8.Ur flow was bassically the same as dizzie.Ur punchlines lack complexity which rascal had.

Vote-dizzie rascal
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