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Young Dollar | 5 | 83.33% | |
K-Trini | 1 | 16.67% | |
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06-05-05, 09:30 PM | #16 |
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Young Dollar
k-trini i liked your verse. if you were going up against someone in a lower caliber then young dollar then you koulda won. but he killed ya with the shit you wrote to him. young dollar i liked the opener. ending felt kinda like you just were tryin ta finsih. but on the whole definitly a nice verse. v/young dollar |
06-05-05, 10:52 PM | #17 | |
Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
Voted For: K-Trini
-Young Dollar- K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ ^^^^ 7/10 good opener.. good punch.. little bit of a played concept Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ ^^^^ 6/10 not feeling this at all Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ ^^^^ 7/10 first line is pretty much a cut-n-paste.. should of worded it different Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ ^^^^ 8/10 ya best line.. good punch True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight ^^^^ 6/10 weak closer.. weak punch 34/50 = %68 -K-Trini- This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ ^^^^ 7/10 haha.. good opener.. lackin in the punch Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ ^^^^ 9/10 hot bar.. hard punch.. good flow Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ ^^^^ 7/10 ehh self-glory.. could of been better My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ ^^^^ 6/10 weak To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ ^^^^ 6/10 weak closer.. weak punch 35/50 = %70 -:No hate just honest opinion:-
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06-06-05, 11:04 AM | #18 | |
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IP: AE53 4C11
Voted For: Young Dollar
K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight Pretty Decent Verse, Few Iight Linez Dawg, Nuthin 2 Spectacular. Personalz Were Strong, U Juz Lacked Da Wordplay In Yo Punz 2 Really Come Hard [but u did enuff 2 get da win so its all good] This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ Not A Good Verse, Boring Disses, Closer Sucked Ass, Alot Ov Self Glory, No Personalz & Uncreative Punches, Flow Wuz Off Bcuz Ov Da Seperation Ov Yo Barz, Juz Wuznt Feeling Yo Verse Vote=Young Dolla, Much Better Verse Return Da Favor Or Vote Will Be Removed, Good Job Yall
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06-06-05, 06:14 PM | #19 | |
Semper Fi
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IP: 28AD 5545
Uppin for more votes Lets hurry up N vote for me so we can close dis bia
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06-07-05, 12:33 PM | #20 | |
NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Voted For: Young Dollar
K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ OK OPENER, PRETTY GOOD. Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ NICE PERSONAL, WITHOUTE THE QUOTE IT WOULD HAVE BEEN WACKED AND PLAINED, AND NOT FEELIN "MUSHY" Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ AGAIN NICE HITTIN PERSONAL... Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ MEH WAS OK.... True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight NOT FEELIN IT... ________________________________________________ This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ OK PERSONAL, NO PUNCH THOUGH. Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ NOPE, SO WHAT IF HE LETS YA TAKE A BREATH... Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ WTF.....NOT HITTING. My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ NO PUNCHES IN YA BARS, MAINLY FILLERS...HERE AGAIN To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ YOUR BEST BAR, WAS OK. _________________________________________________- TRINI, YOU ELEVATED...BUT YOUR STILL WACK ONE PUNCH (YOUR CLOSER HIT) BUT THE REST WERE FILLERS REALLY. STRUCTURE, VOCAB AND FLOW WAS PRETTY MINIMAL TOO. YD GETS THIS DUE TO HIS PUNCHES HITTING, AND COMING HARDER WITH A LOT OF PERSONALS. YOUNG, RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DQ'ED. YOU HAVE 3 DAYS.
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06-07-05, 03:58 PM | #21 | |
Semper Fi
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IP: 28AD 5545
Preciate the votes lets end dis battle N bring da win back to Dollar
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06-07-05, 04:16 PM | #22 | |
NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
rtf man, honestly.
Or it WILL be DQ;ed!......
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06-07-05, 07:58 PM | #23 | |
Semper Fi
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IP: 0825 899A
Ay uppin on dis battle RTF returned homie..........GIVE A NIGGA A WIN
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06-07-05, 08:17 PM | #24 | |
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 2029 97B3
Voted For: Young Dollar
Battle Was WEAK!But Young Came A Lil Better! V/Dollar _____________Explanation_________________--- K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~ I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~ ^7/10 Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~ He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~ ^7/10 Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~ Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~ ^Sick(As in VOMITIN) LoL 6/10 Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~ i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~ ^alright 7/10 True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight ^Alright 7/10 ______________K-trini'z EXPLANATION_____________ This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/ His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./ ^Kewl 7/10 Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/ Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/ ^Umm Weak 6/10 Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/ Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/ ^??6/10 My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/ I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/ ^6/10 To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/ Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/ ^WTF 6/10 ________________________- Openerollar Middleollar Closerollar Punchesollar Vocabollar No Need No More To Say!Kewl Battle~! [Size=4]RTF In my Link With XQUIZITLYRICIST]@yall! OR THIS VOTE GETS REMOVED!
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