uppin this cmon yall...........

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Alright, this is what I thought..

At times it seemed like your flow fell off a little bit. Like, the syllable count was to far fetched for the change to be unnoticeable.

This could be done to a more slow, but hyped type of a beat. That could turn out pretty sick.

Other then that, the way you went about going around the topic in your verse was pretty good.

Keep posting yo.

thank you........

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