^^ thats the structure that works for me, it how I been writin since I started, and down south our style isnt about vocab....but thanks for feedin though

not bad....... not bad.....

nice emotions

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Bizzacckkk

flow was on point that's was makes the drop hot to me but honestly it was kinda long i aint read the 3rd verse but everything i read was hot str8 concept i wanna hear this audio

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Nigga Im Nasty My Style Is Sound Porn !

yooooooooooo man been a lonvg time mhows it vgoin.... need to tlk on aim sumtime n catcmh up aint talked 2 u in moooooooooooooooooooontmhs lol nice drop btw u aint lost ya touch