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R-Rated 2 28.57%
King Solo 5 71.43%
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Old 06-10-05, 12:13 PM   #1
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Voted For: King Solo

Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..

A KIND OF A PLAYED CONCEPT, BUT YOU PULLED IT OFF IN THE FINAL PUNCH, GOOD OPENER.

Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..

PLAYED CONCEPT AND PUNCH SO JUST...BLAH, AVERAGE.

Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..

YEAH NICE PERSONAL AND PUNCH, HIT HARD.

This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..

HAHA NICE PUNCH AND CREATIVENESS.

I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..

NICE NAMEPLAY AND CLOSER, GOOD PUNCH.

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OK, ITS LIKE THIS,
FIRST OFF PROPS TO BOTH FOR COMING HARD AS FUCK AND BOTH WERE PACKED WITH GOOD NAMEPLAYS PUNCHES AND WERE, FOR THE MOST PART CONSISTANT.

SOLO GETS THIS BY A HAIRLINE IN MY OPINION DUE TO STAYING CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT, HIS PUNCHES AND PERSONALS WERE ON FORM AND HIT EVERYTIME..
rATED YOUR VERSE WAS ALSO GOOD BUT AS I SAID IN THE BAR BREAK DOWN, YOUR PLAYED CONCEPTS TOOK IT AWAY FROM YOU EVEN THOUGH MOST PUNCHES FROM BOTH WERE CREATIVE AND DOPE.

NO HATE, JUST MY HONEST OPINION. GOOD BATTLE.
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Old 06-10-05, 12:21 PM   #2
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did my vot in notepad and copied it wrong, whole thing here:

Check it,
Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..

I SAW THE THREAD SO IMO VERY NICE OPENER AND GOOD WORDPLAYT PUNCH.

Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!”..

MEH, DECENT CONCEPT JUST NOT THE BEST PUNCH REALLY.

Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..

HAHAHA NICE WORDPLAY, GOOD NAMEPLAY, WAS FEELIN IT.

5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..

NICE SETUP LINE, BUT WANS FEELIN THE FINAL PUNCH.

Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past……………………………………… ………
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for.. (5-4)

AND AGAIN, NICE CLOSER GOOD PERSONAL.

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You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..

A KIND OF A PLAYED CONCEPT, BUT YOU PULLED IT OFF IN THE FINAL PUNCH, GOOD OPENER.

Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..

PLAYED CONCEPT AND PUNCH SO JUST...BLAH, AVERAGE.

Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..

YEAH NICE PERSONAL AND PUNCH, HIT HARD.

This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..

HAHA NICE PUNCH AND CREATIVENESS.

I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..

NICE NAMEPLAY AND CLOSER, GOOD PUNCH.

__________________________________________________ ___

OK, ITS LIKE THIS,
FIRST OFF PROPS TO BOTH FOR COMING HARD AS FUCK AND BOTH WERE PACKED WITH GOOD NAMEPLAYS PUNCHES AND WERE, FOR THE MOST PART CONSISTANT.

SOLO GETS THIS BY A HAIRLINE IN MY OPINION DUE TO STAYING CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT, HIS PUNCHES AND PERSONALS WERE ON FORM AND HIT EVERYTIME..
rATED YOUR VERSE WAS ALSO GOOD BUT AS I SAID IN THE BAR BREAK DOWN, YOUR PLAYED CONCEPTS TOOK IT AWAY FROM YOU EVEN THOUGH MOST PUNCHES FROM BOTH WERE CREATIVE AND DOPE.

NO HATE, JUST MY HONEST OPINION. GOOD BATTLE.
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Old 06-10-05, 03:37 PM   #3
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Voted For: R-Rated

aiight let me break this shit down:

King Solo:
Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..
kinda a fake personal, but punch was coo... 5/10
Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!”..
eh... is ok............ not bad. 5/10
Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..
no not feelin' it much, but had wordplay.. 4/10
5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..
nooooo.... 3/10
Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past……………………………………… ………
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for..
not bad..... 5/10

OVerall, I've seen you come way harder than this. This one wasn't that great from you. You didn't try that much it looks like. personals were there, but punches were not really. 22/50


R-Rated:

You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..
is coo....... 5/10
Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..
ok............. 4/10
Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..
nice.... 6/10
This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..
lmao.... dope........ 9/10
I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..
not bad....... 5/10

OVerall, not your best verse either. Still you had some decent punches. nothin' special, but that married to the game. wow.... that was only punch I liked in whole match really, and that got it for you. 28/50
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Old 06-11-05, 03:23 AM   #4
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Voted For: R-Rated

"You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked.." was aight not much of a punch but defitnly had the flow and multi's.."Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness" that shit was dope....defitnly a nice punch and a good multi.."Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke.." that too is dope wit punches and metaphors, multi's were aight in this one..."This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40.." that an ok punch coulda been better...but still dope...really good multis and metas.."I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed" dope in multis but not much of a punch..but this shit was tight...still liked ur other one better but u whipped solo's ass by urself...Solo go watch some more star wars...u front....anyway this shit defitnly a 8/10

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Old 06-11-05, 07:15 AM   #5
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uppin this still...............yes Rated votes have been removed

i aint being a bitch
but Poetic T said basically nothing and i was talkin shit to him anyway so possibiliy of a hate vote, not sayin it was..........and straight aim said nuthin about my verse, prolly didnt even read it.............

i aint saying i shud definitely win, either of us cud win, but whoeva does i want it to be from decent votes, not from half-assed shit............
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Old 06-11-05, 10:30 AM   #6
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Voted For: R-Rated

Damn this one was close...

SoLo:

Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..

Not feelin this...3/10

Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!”..

Blah, decent 5/10

Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..

Nice name play 8/10

5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..

Not really feeling this...4/10

Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past……………………………………… ………
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for.. (5-4)

Decent...5/10

Overall: 25/50 (50%)

SoLo you had a decent verse, but you lacked consistency with your punches and your personals werent really helping you because they weren't that good.

R-Rated:

You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..

Nice opener...7/10

Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..

Kinda played concept, but you worded it nice...7/10

Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke

Nice! 9/10

This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..

LMAO!!!! 8/10

I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..

Nice closer...8/10

Overall: 39/50 (78%)

As we can see, R-Rated had the better verse. He was much more consistent with his punches, personals were nice, and everything hit pretty hard. Not the best I've seen from you SoLo...I was kinda dissapointed when reading your verse

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Old 06-11-05, 10:42 PM   #7
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Upping This Motherfucker

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Old 06-12-05, 03:23 PM   #8
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uppin for this battle...................................
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Old 06-13-05, 03:07 AM   #9
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upping this muthaphucka....................
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Old 06-13-05, 06:16 PM   #10
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Voted For: R-Rated

King Solos Verse

Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..
^ Nice opener good punch/personal

Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!”..
^ Good bar aight punch

Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..
^ aight bar again good punch flipped the name as well

5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..
^ lol @ this quick to rid any fake personal and flip into a punch/personal

Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past……………………………………… ………
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for..
^ ooo good closer nice verse

Overall
Good verse Solo feelin the disses in this been a while since i seen a consistant verse nice flow structure even but i think ya layout could be better than the basic...rhyming was a bit basic but other than that good verse

R-Rateds Verse

You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..
^ meh @ self-glory opener coulda been better fam

Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..
^ 2nd line nice 1st line started hmm but punched...

Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..
^ good personal flipped the title

This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..
^ ooo good punch lol like this...

I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..
^ OH nice closer...good personal lol i actually OH'd at that lol

Overall
Nice verse again consistant nice punches both flowed well R's layout was better flowed slightly better too IMO...punches...R-Rated's closer & 3rd bar killed it...real creative nice rhyming too...so basically vote goes to

V/R-Rated...this is an RTF vote so no RTF expected...but manners people
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