Voted For: AckRite


Personals-Khaoz
Punches-Ackrite
Structure-AckRite...damn Khaoz..ur structure=headache..
Multies-Ackrite
FAVORTIE ACKRITE LINE-
"No One Cares 4 Ya Raps...Shit, Everyone Prefers Your Cell-Phone!"
FAVORITE KHAOZ LINE-
ehh....none..dey are all either too stretched...made with fillers...poorly structured...or jus wack..

Khaoz..
--No Hate Famila but You Gotta Up Your Structure..wit da bolding n dat shit u do...like de first bar...
shit > ur structure...
VOTE-ACKRITE


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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

khaoz theory i likd da whole verse not da last line that was weakk but d rest of yur verse was good. solid content, dope punchlines that were dropping in ever bar u had to offer. d personals u used was also gud, u had a dope verse 72/100

ackrite i feel your wordplay were better den kahoz theory but d punches were of equal level from both of u. khaoz had d better personal disses on u so that is wot im am basing d vote on. u was unlucky both of u had gud rhymes

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

I know how active in front lines you both are. So y'all best return the vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189064

or i'll merk you both.

Ackrite:
Khaoz Ya Lifes Meanin...Is Worth Less Than A Prostitutes Cleavage
A Heathen...So God Didnt Bless His Lungs & It 'Cursed His Breathin'!
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Opener didn't really rhymes too good, decent scheme too your punch tho

Fag Your Not Like The Rest...True Shit...Thats Y Ya Punches Is Soft *
Thought You Had Me In Tha Punchline Battle?...Look At The Results!
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didn't really rhyme again. but seriously the personal was ill

Answer This Coward...U Got 13 Wins....From Rooks Is Da Question
You ILL?....But I'll Put An 'End 2 Ya Sickness' Like Allergy Medicine!
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nope prolly your weakest shit my niggar

Nigga Ya Cant Defeat Greats, Go Drink Milk....You Got Weak Bones
No One Cares 4 Ya Raps...Shit, Everyone Prefers Your Cell-Phone!
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good concept, weak personal

Khaoz Has Nothin....Will Be Nothin....Damn, Ya Days Sound Dreary
Wait, Aint This Da Same Fagget.......
Who PULLS TRIGS Since Males Refuse 2 Put Dey 'Cock-In-Theory'! **
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better closer than khaoz

Khaoz
Ugly nigga, you lookin lyke Omarion..But Nobody Wanna Touch
Verses Never See'n O'z..
..........& Elevetation iz Slow, Lyke ur foots on da Clucth!
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his style in the picture is like Omarion, not a bad personal...nothin special tho

Nose Spread Across Yo' face, knock off jewllery 2. Now why would u do that?
no blockin wen I Throw ''42 Bullets'' On Ya Back Lyke 'Jerry Stack'
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first line was a good idea, little stretched but good, second line was ill

Whack herb, win/loss ratio is shameful, Damn Lunatik, Ur Ill?..lol U Liar
Saw yo' open mic'z..1 post ov feed on each & frum ur e-ho Mizz Fyre
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i remember when mizz fyre was my ho once too, har har, im jokin, good personal tho.

Kid, Retire! u can be the first Teen givin it up b4 he hit da Mainstream
Claim Ur Fresh?...Well i guess, its iight bein' a believer ov a DayDream[day dream believer--its and oldie lol]
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not bad, not bad..no need for the explanation, i think everybody got it.

Reppin C.S Til Death? i hope ya krew made a Funeral Arrangement
Ur Last Spit...
...Didnt hit & ended up ''droppin '' on ur Shoe U Derranged-Cunt!
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very very very....SHIT! werd.

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Harder hittin personals, both had alright punches, but personals win battles if you use them correctly...good battle, NOW............................................... .................................................. .............Return the fuckin vote, bitches.

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