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06-16-05, 11:43 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Well I Read the 1st bar And decided that the text was a lil too small so I quit
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06-17-05, 02:30 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
thanks for the feedback stanza ! not!
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06-17-05, 03:42 AM
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Don't try to take my storytellin title
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06-17-05, 03:44 AM
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Yo textcee bob......dont freepost like that u ruinin a good OM
yo and murdz i know we had our beef but this was hot man.......give props where props due......i swear if i hadnt known this was from you I would guess it was from some Eminem or crazy shit like that........mad flows and this was sick.....i read it all...long read lol but it was sick......yo man RTF...link in sig.....pzzzzz
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06-17-05, 03:47 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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Intermental forget the beef man we cool now aiight like fam
 im droppin all beef...1ndeph whats wrong? lol im not takin ur turf, freindly comp
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06-17-05, 03:48 AM
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Champion
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IP: D437 3335
Aiite murdz we kool......RTF link in sig......peace famm
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06-17-05, 04:47 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
yeah done.......
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06-17-05, 05:57 AM
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Nice piece sweetie, you should definitely put this on audio
Flow's mad nice, like how the story developed and how you built it up towards the ending (which I was feeling). You went into detail which kept readers focussed despite the length of it, emotion was nice and imagery was there for sure. Like watching a movie or whatever play in front of your eyes. Good one!
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06-17-05, 06:07 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
thanks DQ i wanna buy u...
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06-17-05, 05:16 PM
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Lol I was playin with you |
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06-18-05, 04:42 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
hahah i kno.. chill dawg..
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06-18-05, 09:06 PM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
uppin any more feed please...
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06-20-05, 02:55 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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bumpppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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06-20-05, 03:01 AM
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nice shit here it reminds me of my "BackStaber" freestyles
nice vocab mulites crazy flow real good the last line dope as hell dawg 8.5/10 please return the favor in one of my "View My Vission" open mic links in my sig
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06-20-05, 03:14 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
yeah dawg i will, just doin sumthin real quick.....
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