upin this yet again............................................. ............

uppin again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

Damnit, where iz da voters? fuck.......................

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Voted For: Indephz

Ok...

KhAoz, I was feeling your verse, but you did not come as hard as he did. Your punches, personals, wordplay, and metaphors were all there, but IMO he just out-did you. You were not very consistent, and you came with a few played lines, which lost you some points. I KNOW that you can do better man, but you have just either been slacking off lately or underestimating your opponents, and that is something that you should never do.

Indephz, real nice verse from you man. Haven't really seen much from you before, but you have talent. You came consistent with one creative punch after another, and they all connected. Had some good/funny wordplay in your verse as well (i.e. your closer, LMAO). Personals were there and they were hitting where it hurts. Overall, a good verse from you.

V. Indephz

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lol Ok, upping 4 more voters on diz...............

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uppin for more votes

uupin diz battle...................................

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Voted For: Indephz

BREAKDOWN

INDEPHZ: A nice drop from you, I think that the overall flow of your verse was near perfect. The fact that you added in several multies assisted your verse. Structure was cool to, you didn't stretch lines, you kept them short and simple and straight to the point. The vocabs in your verse weren't all that complex, pretty basic and wordplay in your verse wasn't all that high really. Punchwise I think you were consistent all the way through, a lot of hard hitting ones and most of them were funny. The opener was the only one I wasn't feeling that much, closer though was dope especially the last line, that made me laugh. One thing to work on, try upping your vocabs making the verse more complex and try and add more wordplay in there. 7/10


KHAOZ THEORY: You also had a nice drop, your lines were a tad stretched at times, it made your flow seem choppy in places, if you would of added multies in there it would've been dope. Punchwise you had some killer ones in there, but also you had some weak ones. The punch where you brought Skriptz into the bar was weak because he isn't in this battle so it was pointless. The wordplay was dope as usual, but only gets you real points if you utilise it with affective punches which I feel you didn't do. Some of the concepts you used were a little played, I think that you are battling too much or something because lately your verses haven't been as good as they were when you first started on RV. 6/10


V/ - INDEPHZ


Return the favour on my Wicked One battle, link is in my sig!!!

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keep da voes cominnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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I hate when bitches vote.If u vote you are a true fag.

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Voted For: Indephz

khaoz lose just off of his ryhme scheme....da way u make ya words ryhme suck....4real...


khaoz theory:
Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''*
''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar!
^^^^WEAK OPENER....DAT SHIT AINT MAKE NO SENSE
battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline
0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time!
^^^^VERY BASIC...
we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses''
he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His
^^^^WHY U STUDDERIN FAM??..IT IT LOL...WHERE'S YA CREATIVITY THO
First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz''
ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN''
^^^^WAS DIS A PUNCHLINE??...CUZZ IT REALLY DIDN'T LOOK LIKE 1
if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs
..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs
^^^WHO??? I NEVA HEARD OF DEM
I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids
only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids
^^^LMAOOOO YO U REALLY SUCK...REAL TALK...CANT U CUM UP WITH SOMTHIN HOTT
Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow''
shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now
^^^???????????

1ndeph:
Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT...
that fake quote,would probably work better when named.
^^^WAIT & NAMED..DONT RYHME
that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope...
yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope.
^^^OKAY
and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in...
nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence.
^^^I CAN SEE UR NOT A CREATIVE PERSON....
westside till you die,then after this you are midwest...
no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset.
^^^OKAY
Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?...
shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez.
^^^OKAYU..LOL


V/1NDEPH.......


RETURN DA FAVOR

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^^he's scared.lol