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damn man,Rapverse has went downhill.

Discardin my hope of to save this earth.But danger lurks.
And the kids will raise there kids,the same way but worse.
this whole generation's hurt.the pain increases at a baby's birth.
what do they deserve...

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I liked that.......this was really good....good topic and good flow and like u sed its audio id love to hear that drop cuzz....RTF plz.....link in sig

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ayo some dope shit...i told u rv went downhill..lol..anyway this o.m is defitnly straight dawg...the vocab was aight went together better in some parts than others...but the story tellin and emotion is defitnly strong with this shit....fo real...8.5/10....some good shit.....u musta got kicked off of AIM but it aight i have ta go ta bed anyway..tireder than a muthafucka...but anyway welcome to the crew and anyone reading this thread make sure ta pm me, Indeph, or Militant, ta join..we gon bring rv back ta how it used ta be....anyway..good shit fam keep it..love ta see the next shit u do...we should collab sometime..peace

ayo ur sigg down????

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uppin for the fam.....anybody...ya'll know this a dope piece..just type what ya think

feeling the second verse a hell of alot more
then the first sequence of bars, shit had me
from start to end...mad dope, seriously indepth..
you kno me kiddo, i dont say its dope unless it is..
n i dont break ya balls unless its shit...1st verse to me was ass
but the second was so much better in every sense of the werd..
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Daz

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

my bad 2nd fuckup..^^feedback above..lol, damn pc

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

lol, my bad...3rd fuckup..

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

its ok some poeple were just born ta be fuck-ups....lol just kiddin..im just playin i had ta say it..it was too good

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CHAR!!! chaar

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