You couldn't be silent and deadly if you were passing gas - nice

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can we please get some votes in
i will return the favor in your batteles

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

ayo my boy narc killed you.....

......nice verse man keep it up....

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my bad i meant to post that as feedback............

Still uppin this batytle if you vote i will return the favor

uuupppppppiiiiiinnnnnn............................ ...

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Voted For: Black Queen

punches...narc
personals...black queen
creativity...black queen
wordplay...narc
flow...black queen
multiz...narc
vocab...black queen
enjoyment...black queen

uzi ya punches were good but u od'd when u kept talkin bout sexual shit, jus cuz u battlin a chic u kept talkin bout shit like dat....it gets restless, made ya verse borin cuz who doesnt do that when battlin a girl?? exactly

V/Black Queen


RTF

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3 sexual refrences and you say i OD'D lmao! whatever nigga.

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

black queen- punches were simple......i couldn't make sense of your first two lines....you had weak personals tho you did come creative at one point and you used aight wordplay but still i didn't feel that you did enough to take the win

take a stab at your temple, like killing sprees in churches
^^^i felt that line the most...keep doing what you do

Narc- uzi- first time i've read one of your battles and your verse was pretty sick.....the wordplay was real nice.....your opener was good
After im done wit you you wont be able to jump but youll have plenty "hang-time"
Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"

and you kept it consistent....coming hard with the punches....tho i think the whole battle was lacking in personals and i think both of ya'll should use them more....however my vote goes to Narc-Uzi

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uppin dis battle.........................................

still uppin............................................. .....

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

NaRc-UzI

After im done wit you you wont be able to jump but youll have plenty "hang-time"
Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"
^hehe, 2nd line is bit self-glorifying but it works though

Uzi "got to cough" and yell bullshit when you rhyme cause ur "verses aint hot"
Cause this queens idea of "finishin me off" involves her "lickin my cock"
^haha lmao @ the last line, bold one man lolz

You gotta "understand" that "my guns" and "my hands" aint "never divorcin"
Im not "outta proportion" but my rhymes will give Black Queens verse an "early abortion"
^cool bar, nice wordplay

Lets be "realistic" and tell everybody that you just a "barbie"
You dont want to "go to war" but you wish that you "are me"(army)
^good, nice usage of same sounds

In this battle your like "discharged credit cards" cause your "win is declined"
I told Queen lets meet "face to face" but she said "no" i preffer it from "behind"
^haha nice bar right here, funny shit

"Queen is lame" and cant take me out like "cranberry barry stains"
"Its a shame" that she be blowing on my dick like old "nintendo games"(lmao)
^wordplay's good right here, aight closer

Stayed nice consistent with funny punches, had some personals in there too by playing out the entire girl/queen-thing. Flow was excellent as well as your vocab, structure was nice and the wordplay was definitely there. Good battle!

Black Queen

its figure fucking point, ready to take a situation
or take situation for hostage, make a hostage situation
^uhm ain't really feelin opener

this kid needs obliteratin’.. if you fucking talking the shit
prove yourself to me, and I’ll give you a shot-to the chest bitch
^coo bar, no real punch though

take a stab at your temple, like killing sprees in churches
you still wouldnt win even if I called myself wack on purpose?
^good bar

It's no mystery, like Lucifer, you're falling from grace
Needs a week to write; he only makes four dope bars in a day
^nice wordplay first line, second is random punch

In a way, your spit purified water cuz you've got a plain flow
This a battle to the death only cuz your style's it's slow and painful
^i'm diggin first one, second is bit bleh

You couldn't be silent and deadly if you were passing gas
So forget about your finals, you ain't passin' class
^coo, bit basic though

I'm nice with writs, like wrestlin' matches, I'll put him in a casket, y'all
Whenever he posts up, he stands under the hoop in basketball
^okay okay

I'm better; even a model could spit your verse in a hotter way
Only Deepthroat you know of is the informant from Watergate
^loving last line

Seen way better battles from you actually, it's like you didn't even try you know. Had some coo punches but some stuff was real basic, it's just weird to see it from you cause I'm used to seein mad creative shit lolz. Flow was good though, structure was cool and overall it was solid

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thanks for voting im up 3-1 still uppin..........................