werd, i was about to do it for him...

smells KO...

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Voted For: Tekneek

One Sided battle

flow, struture and vocab lost from Hoe sit down n perfect from Tekneek.... good wordplay n punchlines... both
creativity wuz a tie...

kinda hard to vote but tekneek got his punches hard hittin, hoe sit down's punches wuz aight but I read sum with a lack of sence.. no hate man
Hoe Sit Down - 8/10 (fix the whole structure n flow)
Tekneek - 9.5/10 (fix ur structure a lil bit)

V/ Tekneek

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oh... RTF...................
n get more honest votes......

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Voted For: Tekneek

idrty fucka, kickin'-spittin' nothin' but grimey,
You can just-try-me, end-up dead-up, behind-me./
^6self glorifing
"Iron casket","death-inpenetrable" any less-unaccept-able, mind, lyrical re-cep-ticle./ You got "Chest-i-cles", from bullets holes-cold, drippin'-and-frozen, cut off your "little-testicles" and go-"kiddie-bowlin'./ I'm str8 control-lin' any siteation that I'm thrown-in, scarier than barbarian like that homey-Co-nan./ Holy-rollin' like an O.G. ghost wit da-most-flava, don't need a favor I see through you-like-a-laser/ elec-tric frequencies hit ya-neck like a taser, like you were met-wit-your fate-son you just sweat-'til-the-day-comes./I spray-gunz...
But only in a, ly-rical-sense, shootin' up the paper, like I had "clips-in-da-pens" If its a-hit-it-depends on your ly-rix-and-your-friends- cuz if you don't have the love, you ain't SHIT -to-the-end. I'm spit-tin'-again cuz i'm high-and-i'm-dazed, love for the spits, thats why-I-get-blazed! ...

I ain't gon bother breakin it down because I can;t.U strucutred ur verse terribly.Don't make it like a paragraph.And ease up with the self glorify talk.Stop talkin about killin him.....just diss.Save that murder shit for open mic.


i bet you can't stand~me~fool, have ya ass-gone when ya rapz get 'passed~on' more than 'family~jewelz'!,
she got a man~to~pull? nah she be pullin~ho's and even if she wore 'panty hose' she ain't 'full~of~flow',
^^Ok....but the bar didn;t connect
this hoe don't get it? i'ma leave you~hintz, but you should of knew~since i was 'drawin ya plan out' like 'blue~printz',
you might as well not bring~a~spit cuz you ain't gettin da 'upperhand' if i gave you mah 'finger~tipz'!,
^^OK
linger~bitch but you wrong if you think you~in~this cuz i'ma leave ya 'strugglin' like a new~business,
you~win~this?, she could be 'attached to a kicked down door' and still not be 'off a few~hinges'!!,
^^weak
believe~ya~rhymez? nah they just seedz~of~lies, leave you 'round faced' like i tried to feed~you~pies!,
^^OK
you need a breather~guy...oh you a woman right, well what does she think about 'womenz rightz'? she likes 'either~side'!!!
^^mediocre

Ur verse was not hot by any means.But compared to the other guy...it's a mastrepeice.Stop with the "~" bullshit.Just write ur shit normal.Upp ur werdplay too.But u got this.I'd be surprised if you don't KO.

Vote-Teekneek(vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

man... c'mon

battle on my sig.

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Bizzacckkk

Voted For: HOE_SIT_DOWN

your rhymes are too weak...you spit verses like your in yr 5

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Fucking Hater....................
Cancel Dat Vote Mod,s..................

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uppin this...............no more fake vote like the one from that herb slick flow.....

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Voted For: Tekneek

HSD had some nyce multis./...but, thats about it....

i refuse to do a bar by bar break just cuz of how HSD keyed....but, Tekneek had more aimed lines with nyce hittin punches....HSD aimed the lines, but they didnt connect well....Also, HSD, ya structure is horrible...lay ya verse out to where we can catch the flow...

v/tekneek

PM me if i gotta break it down better....i'll gladly do it....

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