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Old 06-26-05, 01:53 PM   #1
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yeah i understand that, but you could have done it much better, the beat didnt suit the topic and it was done very cheasily and poorly, and simplisticly, also that doesnt change the fact the flow was un-polished e.t.c

the beat did suit the topic, when your takin bout tits....your gonna use a club hype beat....not some laid back deep methodical beath.....flow was on point, flow was simple ab/ab but was on point none the less....and done poorly and is this even a word cheesily....nah it wasnt i cleaned up the vocals got all this hiss and shit out of it, hence quality is betta than half the cats here, and "cheesily" thats your opinion yea you may think its cheesey but its a joke track, its not like ima spend 2 months on this shit getting perfect....im not promoting myself to be a 50 cent thats why if you read het first post you would know this is a joke, ....
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jokes aside, its abit of both, ppl are driven too much by money so go for that sound knowing its how to sell majour units rather than being original its gay really, but ah well
......money?? you must not be talkin about me....

honestly if you got beef with straight aim because he actuall likes this track and dosent get the joke fine.....but dont come up in my thread sayin shit like this track was poorly made lyrics were horrible.....because it then shows that both you and omen and straight aim dont get the joke.
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Old 06-26-05, 12:31 PM   #2
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^guess im not the ONLY idiot who thinks this song was wack huh??? or wait... is there just too many corny fucks online nowadays? hmmm dnno a or b
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Old 06-26-05, 12:33 PM   #3
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jokes aside, its abit of both, ppl are driven too much by money so go for that sound knowing its how to sell majour units rather than being original its gay really, but ah well
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Old 06-26-05, 02:45 PM   #4
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i stopped reading after u said "the beat did suit the topic, when your takin bout tits....your gonna use a club hype beat....not some laid back deep methodical beath."

u dont need some candy arse commercial club beat, u could easily have used an underground beat with a bounce and a slight comedic feel to it but yet more original i have boat loads thatd suit the topic, but ur un-original
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Old 06-26-05, 02:52 PM   #5
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because it then shows that both you and omen and straight aim dont get the joke.


i dont think i get the joke...
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Old 06-26-05, 02:59 PM   #6
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ok let me put it blunt for you yeah.

i get the joke.... but it wasnt funny

funny is something like

whats the difference between michael jackson and ackney?? atleast acknet waits untill your 15 before it cums all over ya face

but this was poorly written, your flow speeded up at times like u was rushing to fit it in the bar, therefore the flow is sloppy, your lyrics were extremely basic

take the advice and crit n stop making excuses, id murk u in a battle easy nuff said
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Old 06-26-05, 04:17 PM   #7
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ok let me put it blunt for you yeah.

i get the joke.... but it wasnt funny

funny is something like

whats the difference between michael jackson and ackney?? atleast acknet waits untill your 15 before it cums all over ya face

but this was poorly written, your flow speeded up at times like u was rushing to fit it in the bar, therefore the flow is sloppy, your lyrics were extremely basic

take the advice and crit n stop making excuses, id murk u in a battle easy nuff said

then murk me in a battle....set it up
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Old 06-26-05, 04:22 PM   #8
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^wooooooo!!!!!!!
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