btw.....i be on HELLA sites homie.....gunitworld, rapbattles, etc unda my other name u have no clue whut u talkin about so chill dont even create controversy

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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.


To Be Truthful You Mom Said Lose You So This Guys Adopted....
I'll Blaze Ya Transport You To Asia And Leave You In A China Closet...
^^^whack
Fix Your Verse Come Harder On The Bridge Your Lines The Worste...
Son Chill, Don't Come Hea To Battle Take Notes Similar To A Typing Clerk....
^^^whack
Quoting Bars In His Sig,Not His Like The Grill Of A Car He's Just A Bumper...
Your Girl Was Easy To Pull, She Seen Me And H2 All I Had To Do Is Humm-Er...
^^^well.....ur best ....but still weak
Let Me Give You A Break,But On The Real Ya Verse What The Worste They Are..
Have You Floating On A Boat And You'll Die With The Expressions On A Birthday Card..
^^whack

Ur punches were wheak.U structured ur verse nicely.Flow was choppy at points,so next time try to make em more consistant.But ur verse suked....strictly because it was weak.No hate,just gotta be real.~1~

Kid Imma Verbally Slay U....Everyone "Cuts Dis Nut Off" Like Circumcized Cable
Rip U? I Cain Cuz Im Abel, Signed 2 Feces...No One Gives A Shit Bout His Label!
^^mediocre
Honestly Beatin Doza Is Simple..Since He Cant 'Stand Beef' Like Disabled Hindu's
Dis Disciple Been Thru...Cuz His Bars So "Sea-Nile" Dey Resemble "Moses-Facial
^^^nice...speccialy the first one
Like 'Lost Dogs' Ya Lyrics I'll 'Pound'...True Talent??? NOPE U Still Havent Found
Whos Doza Today?...Like "Memorable Nymphos" U KNOWN 4 Switchin Ya Style! *
^^OK
Nigga Da Truth Hurts....So Admit It, Ur Da Reason "Usher" Made "Confessions"
Pretend Theres 2 Of Me...Cuz Winnin...U Gon "Let-Us" Without Salad Dressing!
^^that 1st usher one had me rolling.Nice punch

I liked ur verse...except the 1st one.Flow was ight throughout the verse.Nice metas and werdplay.Funny Usher line at the end.Nice verse.

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aight but do i have enuff posts 2 vote on u niggaz battles? if i don't i'll do it when i got enuff

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1103 got dis, dude had crazy punches and wordplay nice shit tho kordozar

yo Bul dont got no alias me him and a few more niggas came from gunitworld, but 1103 Get at me dun bout a different site iight

Chea, out

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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.

aiight let's see:

Bull:
Kid Imma Verbally Slay U....Everyone "Cuts Dis Nut Off" Like Circumcized Cable
Rip U? I Cain Cuz Im Abel, Signed 2 Feces...No One Gives A Shit Bout His Label!
tried wordlpay. ok....... 4/10
Honestly Beatin Doza Is Simple..Since He Cant 'Stand Beef' Like Disabled Hindu's
Dis Disciple Been Thru...Cuz His Bars So "Sea-Nile" Dey Resemble "Moses-Facial
lol nice wordplay..... 7/10
Like 'Lost Dogs' Ya Lyrics I'll 'Pound'...True Talent??? NOPE U Still Havent Found
Whos Doza Today?...Like "Memorable Nymphos" U KNOWN 4 Switchin Ya Style! *
not bad... good wordplay.. 5/10
Nigga Da Truth Hurts....So Admit It, Ur Da Reason "Usher" Made "Confessions"
Pretend Theres 2 Of Me...Cuz Winnin...U Gon "Let-Us" Without Salad Dressing! **
haha, nice wordplay... 7/10

Yea, nice dude. Your wordplay is real good. jus work on the punches. Your worldplay helped you a lot tho. good shit wit it. but keep elevating dog. props 23/40

aiight Kor:

To Be Truthful You Mom Said Lose You So This Guys Adopted....
I'll Blaze Ya Transport You To Asia And Leave You In A China Closet...
eh... not really feelin' it....... 4/10
Fix Your Verse Come Harder On The Bridge Your Lines The Worste...
Son Chill, Don't Come Hea To Battle Take Notes Similar To A Typing Clerk....
eh......... 4/10
Quoting Bars In His Sig,Not His Like The Grill Of A Car He's Just A Bumper...
Your Girl Was Easy To Pull, She Seen Me And H2 All I Had To Do Is Humm-Er...
lmao.. nice wordplay. made me laugh. 8/10
Let Me Give You A Break,But On The Real Ya Verse What The Worste They Are..
Have You Floating On A Boat And You'll Die With The Expressions On A Birthday Card..
coo.... 6/10


Damn, you started bad, but picked it up tho. You had about even wit punches wit him. But his wordplay was a what edged you out. 22/40

both of y'all came nice. but i liked the wordplay in Bull's. Cuz punches and flow were pretty much even too me. good battle tho.

v/Bul

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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.

wow, this was a nyce battle....good lines coming from both sides....


Kid Imma Verbally Slay U....Everyone "Cuts Dis Nut Off" Like Circumcized Cable
Rip U? I Cain Cuz Im Abel, Signed 2 Feces...No One Gives A Shit Bout His Label!
^^nyce word play mayne....kew lil punch to back it up
Honestly Beatin Doza Is Simple..Since He Cant 'Stand Beef' Like Disabled Hindu's
Dis Disciple Been Thru...Cuz His Bars So "Sea-Nile" Dey Resemble "Moses-Facial
^^lol....ya wordplay is nyce...kew lil punch with it
Like 'Lost Dogs' Ya Lyrics I'll 'Pound'...True Talent??? NOPE U Still Havent Found
Whos Doza Today?...Like "Memorable Nymphos" U KNOWN 4 Switchin Ya Style! *
^lol....good personal....
Nigga Da Truth Hurts....So Admit It, Ur Da Reason "Usher" Made "Confessions"
Pretend Theres 2 Of Me...Cuz Winnin...U Gon "Let-Us" Without Salad Dressing! **
^...wordplay was kew....nyce lil diss

overall:...you had a pretty strong verse cuz you kept it consistent...you got skill with the wordplay

To Be Truthful You Mom Said Lose You So This Guys Adopted....
I'll Blaze Ya Transport You To Asia And Leave You In A China Closet...
^clean opener...punch was kew
Fix Your Verse Come Harder On The Bridge Your Lines The Worste...
Son Chill, Don't Come Hea To Battle Take Notes Similar To A Typing Clerk....
^nope....wasnt feelin it
Quoting Bars In His Sig,Not His Like The Grill Of A Car He's Just A Bumper...
Your Girl Was Easy To Pull, She Seen Me And H2 All I Had To Do Is Humm-Er...
^...i saw the relation in both lines...it was a good concept..and hard ending, but 1st line shoulda been wordin better
Let Me Give You A Break,But On The Real Ya Verse What The Worste They Are..
Have You Floating On A Boat And You'll Die With The Expressions On A Birthday Card..
^wasnt feeling this

overall:...ya verse had some good point...but you didnt stay consistent....work on that

v/.Kan.i.Bul.
on the basis of punches...consistency...personals...and overall effect...

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