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Old 07-03-05, 12:18 PM   #1
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Shit was coo' I was feelin the 1st cat..
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Old 07-03-05, 01:39 PM   #2
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shit i was feelin this good ish to both...i thought blak magik came real good....good track
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Old 07-03-05, 03:57 PM   #3
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goood shyt right here..

both of ya had good verses.. the flows on both verses were nice and had creative lines.. not something alot of song writers could do in songs.. the chorus goes very nice with the beat.. well yeah both of ya basiclly had a good verse and all i could say is keep writting
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Old 07-03-05, 04:46 PM   #4
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black magic had good flow but weak pun
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Old 07-14-05, 09:03 PM   #5
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Old 07-15-05, 01:26 AM   #6
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1st dude good quality, dub volume could be down a tad, flow is a lil off sometimes, kinda basic flow doe, voice aint bad, deleivery is basic too

chorus needs to be dubbed more and made more powerful too basic sounds like a verse

2nd dude need to work on a flow, u can tell u record each bar seperate, it breaks up alot and u can tell, messes up flow
lyrics good. voice ight, quialty needs to be upped

beat koo

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Old 07-15-05, 06:03 PM   #7
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nice track, only thing that needed work was the chorus.. this really was hot, i was feeling it. my first time hearin the both of you rappin... really good to hear something nice on the ears. nice quality, both verses had good lyrics and good flow n delivery.
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Old 07-15-05, 08:26 PM   #8
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this isn't as crazy as most have been saying...that harriet tubman line is so overplayed...first emcee...flow is cool...lyrics are nice...delivery and emotion is cool...chorus is dope..second emcee is dope feeling his verse a little more...lines were cool.overall 8/10
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Old 07-16-05, 03:24 AM   #9
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