upp'in this battle for more explained votes plez..

Voted For: Reach.

(2) Flow and Structure-- REACh
(1) Opener-- criminal
(1) Punches and word play --- criminal (criminal took it slightly i like puns and i thought the "cop-out" line was good)
(1)-- closer--- Reach--
This Convict's Cut, Shower time...Your Fucked
This Boy's got less delivery than a Pizza Hut

lol

criminal work on the flow and u'll get it next time------ good drop from both----

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

upp'in this battle-----------------------------------
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Voted For: criminal

Flow-Reach
personals-criminal
punches-criminal
multis-criminal
structure-reach
creativity-criminal
enjoyment-criminal

i think tha criminal got this cause he came harder and had better punches and i enjoyed his verse more

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Voted For: criminal

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upp'in this battle for some votes to finish this madness

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Voted For: Reach.

REACH.

I peep'd ur past, and son....your ass
Your lines are longer than paragraphs
^Short, got right to the point nice punch 4/10^
Wit the dash'-An'SlaSH! shit, save the space
Your just an example that Trojans break...
^good personal, nice multis 7/10^
A straight mistake a mis hap a broken criminal,
The only conviction u hold is bein invisible
^weak punch/personal, wasnt fealin it 0/10^
I break your spine an coccix, switch cords an spit,
Just to give a legitamite reason for u to spit shit
^this is good wordplay, good punch 7/10^
This Convict's Cut, Shower time...Your Fucked
This Boy's got less delivery than a Pizza Hut
^Good closer, way to end it....nice job 8/10^
Overall:This verse was small, yet got right to the point the flow was good, ur inserted good multis and great punches and personals way to attack your opponent.

Criminal

The Best Regarded, Aggressive, Times up!, so Set ya Guard Up
Ya ‘words above mine’?, NEVER, unless I Replied to a Thread YOU STARTED!
^Forced the rhyme, weak opener 3/10^
When I spit and say “there ain’t a whole lot to it”, It’s cuz it was an EASE-to-Bust…
But when YOU spit and I say “see there ain’t a whole lot to it” it’s cuz it was WEAK-as-FUCK!!!
^kinda bad flow, punch was weak as fuck...0/10^
In stead of “markin his set backs” he carves “Progress-in-his-Memory”
So I “Squash the beef” and “heat it when it’s In my grill” like Hamburger’s “Process-and-Delivery”
^No punch inserted, felt u coulda done better 0/10^
Yall “cop out” like “police shift endings” when they Leavin-for-their-Own-Homes
Claimin ya ain’t “seen nuthin worth replyin to”…that’s cuz you still Readin-all-ya-Own-Flows
^Pretty decent punch, liked the way it flowed..5/10^
Doesn’t matter HOW NICE you are cuz I CRUSH-Vet’s-Perfect-Spits…
Because it’s “easy to clown you” like “One-Step-Circus-Kits”!!
^Nice closer, good wordplay at that...prob. best line...6/10^
OVERALL:I felt your lines were poorly structured, u offered a bad flow....ur punches were decent but nothing quite that hard hitting, as for ur personals i think u also lacked those...ur multis where absent.

v/reach.

rtf on my sig links within 3 days or this vote will be dq'd

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Voted For: criminal

Reach.
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I peep'd ur past, and son....your ass
Your lines are longer than paragraphs
(nice punchline)
Wit the dash'-An'SlaSH! shit, save the space
Your just an example that Trojans break...
(weak..)
A straight mistake a mis hap a broken criminal,
The only conviction u hold is bein invisible
(dude, i'd love to be invisible)
I break your spine an coccix, switch cords an spit,
Just to give a legitamite reason for u to spit shit
(no flow)
This Convict's Cut, Shower time...Your Fucked
This Boy's got less delivery than a Pizza Hut
(was ok but didnt hit hard..)
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criminal
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The Best Regarded, Aggressive, Times up!, so Set ya Guard Up
Ya ‘words above mine’?, NEVER, unless I Replied to a Thread YOU STARTED!
(good)
When I spit and say “there ain’t a whole lot to it”, It’s cuz it was an EASE-to-Bust…
But when YOU spit and I say “see there ain’t a whole lot to it” it’s cuz it was WEAK-as-FUCK!!!
(lol, nice line im feeling that)
In stead of “markin his set backs” he carves “Progress-in-his-Memory”
So I “Squash the beef” and “heat it when it’s In my grill” like Hamburger’s “Process-and-Delivery”
(long as fuck but after re-reading it i got what you mean)
Yall “cop out” like “police shift endings” when they Leavin-for-their-Own-Homes
Claimin ya ain’t “seen nuthin worth replyin to”…that’s cuz you still Readin-all-ya-Own-Flows
(nice personal..)
Doesn’t matter HOW NICE you are cuz I CRUSH-Vet’s-Perfect-Spits…
Because it’s “easy to clown you” like “One-Step-Circus-Kits”!!
(this was a nice mix, personal n punchline, good work)


criminal you need to work on cuttin down your lines, so your verse flows better, but you had it 4 me...and
Reach, you need to work on vocab, and punchlines...

werd..

v/criminal

RTF ppl...they in my sig

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Voted For: Reach.

I don't really know how yall break it down here yet.....so I'ma do it like I know........

flow = reach
punches = reach
personals = niether
complex = criminal
multies = niether
open = criminal
close = reach

VOTE ===REACH.

NOTE TO CRIMINAL.......you need to take out the 'becauses' and all the rest of the un-needed words that stretch ya lines out.......it makes it cleaner and easier to read........1.............

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Criminals' been banned for biting...so............

Voted For: Reach.

you got the win