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.Barz Of Steel. 5 100.00%
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Old 06-30-05, 08:48 AM   #1
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ok this battle was very simple PH didnt have any structure in his rhymes and its all ova tha place man litterally but man u need major help man 4real u just rhymed and thats it but BOS man nice verse man well flowed through strucutre good good lines and some wordplay work on ya vocab a little more and thats it u killed him actually merked him man nice work both keep workin though but PH u need a lot of practice see other battles on how to set everything up but dont bte....lol

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Old 06-30-05, 02:00 PM   #2
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

barrz of stell u are so surreal/u a cracka microphone blasta/i seea ya in tha club u a fool u can't even 1,2 step/dawg u call ur shit a dance u a gangsta/hell i know i ain't all i do is pull up my pant and lean back cause my shit bac/when u spitt ur shit its a dud every1 in da club sniff there nugg!


^^ weak as hell dont flow no punch no metas no noting just keep trying fam thats all i can say for u..


Im the sickest, written or not everytime I'm spittin its hot
Im the shit when I drop, you're just shit when you drop
He says he's real but this queen's fake, this kid will never be great
Cuz the best thing to come from Philly..................is cheesstake
This kid's weak, emcee? kid you need to get out of hip-hop
Cuz just because your breath stink, it dont mean that you spit hot

how did u know he was this wack??
ya verse was weak as hell....
no punches, no good metas no multis no noting, just a flow with a diss or 2 thats it another weak verse this shit is hurting my eyes word....

vote: bars for being less-wack outta the 2
 
 


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